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    December 26, 2015
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    Why sushi is more popular Delicacy characterizes Japanese food. They are served in small amount, with exquisite dishes, and maybe in enjoyable environment. While Chinese food highlights it's species richness, good favour. The two countries have their own food style. But one day my friend mentioned that sushi is more popular than any Chinese food, which pushes me to seek the reason. Sushi, as the representation of Japanese food, perfectly combines meal and other ingredients, providing suitable taste for all kinds of people. The small size and the curve shape make sushi very convenient to be swallowed. And you don't need to share it with others as Chinese food requires you to do. Last but not least, It has rich nutrition. The above advantages may contribute to sushi's popularity.
    December 26, 2015
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    我是不是大红人(大红人means popular people, what is the relation between the title and the content?)

    今天我们的班有汉语考试。考试以前,我希望了觉得我一定要能得四分儿。可是,我想错了,因为得了三分。只有我一个人有得了不好的分数。痛哭了三个小时以后,我打算了在这儿练习汉语。这是一件好事儿,你们怎么想看?

     

     

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    December 26, 2015
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    我的同事的朋友

    我的同事的好朋友现在住在纽约。他刚刚结婚了。他的妻子是摄影师,她总是摄影。我的同事去纽约只有一次,她见面。他们对他非常好,她友善,做给饭,做得很好。他们总是对他们的朋友很好。虽然我的同事平时不喜欢大城市,他喜欢纽约,因为在这儿他可以跟他的好朋友见面。

     

    我的同事的好朋友现在住在纽约,他刚刚结婚不久,他的(to remove the unneccessary subject)妻子是摄影师,一直忙着("忙着+verb/noun"means be busy in)摄影工作。我的同事只去过纽约一次,和朋友以及朋友的妻子见了面。朋友的妻子非常友善,还给我的同事做饭,饭菜很美味。他们对我的同事很好,而且对他们别的朋友也总是很好。虽然我的同事平时不喜欢大城市,但是(in Chinese, we need 但是 after 虽然)他喜欢纽约,因为在那儿他可以见到他的好朋友。

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    December 22, 2015
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