The emphasis changes: In the first sentence, it is SO very sudden, putting the emphasis on HOW sudden it is, on the impact of the action. In the second sentence, this is ALL so sudden, puts the emphasis on the SITUATION.

Good luck! :) ~ Jemma

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I thought the cause of being overweight to be fat, but I was mistaken. For example, the “Nikushokudiet” (eating only meat) is popular in Japan. This shows that it is not caused only by fat.

What do you think causes people to be overweight?

I think that is sugar, especially sugar plus fat eaten together, because insulin makes it easy to change sugar into body fat.

Furthermore, too much sugar causes us to become diabetic and hypoglycemic. Hypoglycemia can cause symptoms like those of depression.
In America, out of 1200 patients, 80% of those analyzed with hypoglycemia showed symptoms of depression.
One of the factors in the sudden increase in cases of depression in Japan may be because there is hypoglycemia behind the depression.

Diabetes may cause loss of eyesight and amputation of feet.
The circulation systems of the eyes and feet are damaged by blood sugar.

Lastly, sugar can become an addiction. The addiction caused by sugar is stronger than addiction to cocaine and stimulants.
When there is no sugar, people with a sugar addiction can become irritated and violent.

Therefore, I think that I should not consume sugar, however, right now I have an addiction to sugar,  so I want to reduce my sugar intake.

Thank you for reading.

In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes

Modern technology development has made our lives faster than before, so nowadays people are more concerned about efficiency. As a result, people try to work at higher speed but risk making mistakes.

With the assistance of modern techniques, we work faster than ever before. For instance, people used to made clothes by hand, sewing day and night. In contrast, clothes that we are wearing now are mostly of produced by machine in factories, quickly and in large quantity. However, there are luxury brands that still have handmade clothing as their high price goods, because it's high quality and unique.

Although machines produce products quickly, because it's so fast it's hard to control their quality, and in the end we will have to spend more time to fix or check it. Additionally, it might take twice the time to find out about mistakes so will also will need more human resources working on the same project again.

So if we spend longer time doing our work but making sure that every procedure is correct, we won't need to double check and can make the process work fluidly, and thus we don't need to worry about if a mistake will cause a disaster.

All in all, I disagree with the statement that people should risk making mistakes to work more quickly. I think that making less mistakes is more important than working fast.

My last film

The last weekend I watched a film called 'Sorry If I Call You Love.' It was very romantic and very nice. It was about four friends and all of them have boyfriend except one, but her ex-boyfriend was still in love with her, but she doesn´t love him.

One day, one of the girls was cycling and a car ran her over, but she was fine and she fell in loved with the man driving the car (assuming hat was 'him'?). She was 17 years old and he was 37 years old. They met up every day and as time passed he realised was falling in love with her. But he realised that his was impossible by the differences in their age, but she said nothing was wrong because they were in love, and he realised after he could no longer live without her.