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Hey there! My name is Vanessa, I am 24 years young, and I live in Germany currently. I am here to improve my Spanish (mainly speaking). Even though I signed up on italki about 4 years ago I have hardly taken any classes. So I am curious. Since all uni is going online (very well), I decided to give online classes for Spanish a try as well! :) Looking forward it.
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    Mein erstes Notebook Eintrag

    Hallo! Ich heiße Derek. Ich lerne Deutsch schon seit vier Monaten Deutsch. Ich bin (ein) Student (an) einer Universität und ich möchte irgendwann in Deutschland oder Österreich studieren. Ich denke, dass die Sprache und die Kultur sind  sehr schön sind.




    Well the word order in the first sentence wasn't wrong but now it sounds more fluent I think and better. The "ein" und "an" are in brackets because you don't need to use it here but it is correct ! :)
    I wrote "einer" Universität because you didn't mention the name so it is not a specific university you're talking about. So "einer" is better here.  If you would have mentioned the name of the university "der" would be fine , e.g.:

    Ich bin ein Student an der Harvard University. but: Ich gehe in eine Schule. 

    Well and the last one was just wrong w.o. :) 
    I hope this will help you! Good luck with your studies!

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    January 12, 2016
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    Meine Vorstellung

    Mein Namen ist Ben und ich wohne in den USA. Ich möchte lernen Deutsch zu sprechen, weil ich nächstes Jahr nach Deutchland gehen will. Ich bin ein Medizinstudent im vierten Jahr. Mein Hund und ich laufen gerne taeglich und wir haben viele Ziele waehrend unserer Reise. Koennen Sie bitte mein Schreiben korrigieren. Danke.

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    I couldn't mark your mistakes with colors because  I am using my mobile. I hope the correction is useful anyway. 

    ae,ue,oe = a,e,u with two dots ( I also don't have them on my keyboard right now;)

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    December 13, 2015
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