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- ホストの弟への手紙です （これは私のホストの弟への手紙です。私は日本に行って、私は2年で彼を見ていない時、私は彼の家に泊まりました。） (This is a letter to my host brother. I stayed at his house when I went to Japan and I haven't seen him in 2 years.) こんにちは！お久しぶり! みなさんはお元気ですか? 私は元気です。 最近書いていないため申し訳ありません！最後の2年間はたいへんいそがしかったです。今は大学でかんきょうかがくを勉強します。うれしいです。将輝さんも今勉強しますか？残念ながら、残念ながら、現時点では日本語を勉強することはできません。いつでも私ができるしかし、私はまだ練習します！それも、日本のバラエティばんぐみがたくさんを見ます。好きなばんぐみは「嵐にしやがれ」です。 みなさんからオーストラリアのプレゼントを送りました。私はあなたのすべてはのTim Tams、カラメルコアラとはちみつが好き願っています。彼らはすべての非常にオーストラリアの食べ物です。私も将輝、1920年代といくつかの写真から私の町の絵画とカレンダーの2014フィリップアイランドGPからキャップが含まれています。私は彼らのようなあなたを願っています！ メリークリスマス！ アリソンへDecember 9, 201550
My best friend
My best friend is a girl. She is Her name is Thu. She was studying pedagogy in Ha Noi. We have know each other when we was in the since we were in high school. She has an a round face, a straight nose and long black hair. I love she her very much. We always help each other in our work and lives.was studying: I am not sure what you want to say here. We usually use 'was [doing something]' with another joining sentence, like 'I was smiling while she took the picture.
You can say 'she was studying pedagogy in Ha Noi until...'
or 'she was studying pedagogy in Ha Noi when...'
or 'she was studying pedagogy in Ha Noi while...'
I think what you may want to say is 'she studied pedagogy in Ha Noi.' This is a finished action/sentence. :)
Also just remember to add a space after punctuation marks (.,!?)
It's really good! ^_^
0 votedNovember 22, 20150Today today today
During my school year I spend most of my days studying. I 've got have some free time only in the evenings and I spend it either reading, drawing or surfing on the net.
Today is Sunday. and I did my homework yesterday, so I'm enjoying my free time. I'm surfing on the net and I've just watched a film (an awful film, Twilight) but now I'll turn off the pc and I'll read.
I love reading. I'm reading Wuthering Heights and I really like it :)
ByeIts really good! What you've written already makes sense and these changes are mostly based on what flows better. It's more natural to say 'surfing the net' than 'surfing on the net'. Also 'net' doesn't need to be capitalized as it comes from 'internet' which also isn't capitalized :) Hope I helped a bit! :D (And yes, Twilight is an awful film) ^__^
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