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Hi! My name is Jiatao, or you can call me JT or Tom if you like. I work for a Chinese company located in Guangzhou, south China. I'm trying to learn how to speak proper English and find more practice opportunities. So I come to italki to look for a learning partner who wants to learn Chinese Mandarin. I'm an excellent Chinese speaker and I'm also good at the history and culture of China. Looking forward to being your friend! Please contact me. Cheers ;)
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    去年我去中国。我是杭州浙江大学的留学生。我跟朋友有空的饿（应该是打错字了）时候，喜欢跟当地人一起玩。我们平常去西湖和（此处用“或”更通顺，如果想表达都去，可以加先后顺序词表达起来就更自然）商场唱卡拉OK和（“和”字在语法上完全正确，然而这样并列有些许奇怪，同样可以引入先后顺序表达就显得更加自然）吃中餐。

    （这里可以考虑另起一行，作为一个新的小节）有一天，我们去酒吧，我跟我的朋友分开了。我才意识到我需要独自一个人回宿舍，但是没有确切的地址。噢真糟糕（中文中很少会如此直接地表达惊叹的语气，不过这样表达也很可爱的哈哈哈哈）！我不得不想些快（这里应该是个病句，想快些？没搞明白意思）！我的中文不太好！可是（这里不应该用“可是”，可是表示转折，可以考虑用“幸好”）上课的时候我们学过问路。我能吩咐（吩咐有一种名领导人语气在，可以考虑去掉直接用“指引”）指引出租车司机带我回酒店。这个事情比我说汉语（是“逼”吗？）。以前我害羞（这里有歧义，直接理解可以理解为你以前是个害羞的人，但是我感觉你想表达“每当与中国人交流的时候会变得很害羞”不知对不对），现在我跟中国人（交流时）愿意说中文。我应该（这里不应用“应该”，可以考虑使用“已经”）会说中文常用语。跟我的中国朋友在一起，此行其余的部分（其余部分是什么？）我都很高兴。这是宝贵经验，我学了急中生智和吃亏是福。

    （写得真不错！加油！）

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    没记错应该是《阿房宫赋》吧…貌似是形容阿房宫大得没谱，这边下雨冷凄凄，那边却艳阳高照很温暖。

    Within just one day, in the very same palace you can feel different weather.


    噗哈哈别打我。

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    WHEN DO YOU HAVE YOUR DINNER? Yesterday, a British friend told me that in UK, different people have their dinners in different time during the whole day: Someones have their dinner meals at noon; Someones have their dinner after "Tea" and after that they probably have suppers in the late evening; Someones just call their suppers the "dinner". When do you have your dinner? Please tell me :)
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