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    Drug Legalization - Learning how to write in English! - I hope you help me to correct my mistakes.

    Talking about drug addiction in Colombia is a controversial issue due to the way in which the country has been affected by violent drug trafficking. Over the years, Colombia has seen how talking about drugs become a common topic in mass media, and also it becomes a problem on streets (Not sure what you are trying to say in this sentence). As a consequence of drug consumption, many people's family and social life have been affected.

    A few months ago, a discussion started from the mayor's proposal of a type of drug legalization. Bogota’s mayor proposed to design several places for the controlled consumption of drugs.  They say it would be a way to handle the uncontrolled handling of drugs. Nevertheless, it also would be seen as a way of accepting drug consumption in our society.

    Besides, we cannot know with accuracy whether drug legalization could be a good option to improve the quality of life of those people who are dependant on drugs.  Maybe they do not think this looks helpful and may fear being criticized for its execution.

    As a conclusion, it is possible that a controlled way of drug consumption could be a solution for society.  It means that people could be more tolerant when they are in a similar situation.  Lastly, people need to be aware of consequences, bad or good, that drug legalization can carry.
    However, drugs are not good for people and it would be better to think of other possible solutions that do not involve legalization.

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    Mi tiempo en Colombia Yo fui en Colombia desde el primero de Octubre hasta el seis de Noviembre de este ano. Disfrute mi tiempo mucho especialmente cuando hablando con la gente de Colombia. Pero hay mucho a ver y hacer en Colombia. Yo monte Caballos en Parque Tayrona cerca de la playa, yo nade en lagos de cascadas, yo vi animales exóticas, aprende un poco sobre de la historia moderno, monte en motocicletas en el desierto y en las montanas y muchas otras cosas. Espero que tuve mas tiempo para viajando pero pienso que volvere a Surde America en el futuro. Ahora, estoy en Nueva Yorke y estoy tratando a seguir practicando mi espanol.
    November 9, 2015
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