New look

The last week I have had a congress to for Business Law.
Everybody have had to go, all my classmates should goes went, and normally as usual we try tried to look very good.
My best friends told me she would go to the hairdressed hairdresser and have rollers would be done put in her hair. 
I think thought, maybe, I would go to the hairdressed hairdresser too.
When I finished my job, I have had a little problem I had with my bosses and my team. The meeting dragged on for one hour.
This That day, I come came home to late. I'm had lunched with my family (parents and my brother) and after, I went to the hairdressed hairdresser with my cousin.
I think my cousin have has a good taste. togheter Together, we choose chose the a new haircut and hairstyle.
When the barber was cutting my hair, I felt super light weigth weight but I thinked thought my hair are was very long. I felt blue for a few minutes but later, I looked more and I thinked thought it looked very good.
This That day, I went whit with my brpther and one friends at to Congress in Hotel Guarani. All my friends went and we there they were surprised and said my new look is so good.
I feel happy with my new hairstyle and I think it looks great, haha.

:)

Note:

You need tow rok on your spelling and tenses. Work more on your grammar!

The boy in the stripped pijamas

In the first chapter, the author introduces us to Bruno’s life. Bruno is a kid who lives very close to Berlin in a big house with so many rooms and a beautiful staircase. He mostly likes his life, he has three best friends “for life”, as he says , a lovely mother , and an important father who has a very relevant unknown job. He also has an elder sister, called Gretel, who is most of the time difficult to stand up with. One day, he finds his maid, María, packing his belongings, which is very strange because it only can mean that they are going to travel somewhere. Bruno talks with his mother, who explains to him that, unfortunately they are moving away. This is because of his father’s job. Bruno is confused, frustrated and sad. He feels like his whole life is being destroyed. In fact, he is going to miss his mates and his grandparents as well.

Chapter 2 The New House.
The new house seems to be worse than Bruno expected it to be. He finds it cold, lonely and empty. Also the neighbourhood is quite sad too. There are no houses nearby like in Berlin. There aren´t any shops nor people talking in the streets neither. Bruno thinks that house will never be like home. This new building is smaller and not as cosy as his older one, however, he has more maids and a new chef whom outlook is not so good.

Thankful for that

The second I saw this site which offers everything that I need to be as strong as well in English, l was speechless. ???? l really didn't know what do, I just wanted to shout. It's a comprehensive gift that I ever never had before.. Thanks. ????

Please correct these sentences with NEW WORDS

1. The SHARD of ice is ASTONISHINGLY glorious. It is BLAZING on shing under the light.
2. Tom has a MARVELOUS memory. He can recall every detail from his INFANCY.
3. Ann wore glasses until they were not broken broke. After that she bought LENS, now she doesn't look like a NERDY person.
4. Tom has SHAVED his hair, now he is absolutely BALD.
5. Oil is not SOLUBLE in the water.
6. What is a FLUID here? - It is a bubble mixture.
7. That PROCEDURE was INCREDIBLE, it has RESTORED Ann's health.
8. Ann's speech sounded unnatural, even ARTIFICIAL and in addition too boring. The audience was WEARY. I wondered how people stayed at their places until the end because of ETHIC.
9. The doctor PRESCRIBED the pills for treatment her DIGESTIVE system.
10. Why did you EXPLOIT my private tools? - We had to REPAIR the computer URGENTLY, so we tool?? them.

Note:

The word blazing normally has to do with fire. It's an adjectice which meaning very hot.

The worst vacation!

When I was 7 years old, my mom, grandmother and I wanted to have spend a weekend on at our house of in Veracruz, but first we went to a church because my grandmother is religious. Going to the church helped me because that caused me to sleep. When we entered to the car, I lay laid in the car seat and I fell sleep almost inmediately.

After that, I didn't saw see exactly what happened, but my mom narrated to me that a Vocho quickly slows, and my mom didn't have enough time to avoid it, so our car turned upside down.

When I woke up, I was laying above the roof of my car. Everything happened so fast but fortunately nobody was strongly wounded. Obviouslly Obviously, at in the end, we didn't go anywhere and we had to go to the hospital.


Thank you very much for the corrections!
Greetings :)

My best friend

I'm going to tell you about my best friend. Her name is Rocio and I met since her in 1999. Her hobby hobbies are reading, listening to music but now her new hobby is spent spending time with your her baby. Six months ago, she was a mother, and now she is happy and her husband is also happy same.
We met in the a church a few years ago and when I have troubles, all time she helps me and I really apreciate for her time.