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New look
The last week I have had a congress to for Business Law.
Everybody have had to go, all my classmates should goes went, and normally as usual we try tried to look very good.
My best friends told me she would go to the hairdressed hairdresser and have rollers would be done put in her hair.
I think thought, maybe, I would go to the hairdressed hairdresser too.
When I finished my job, I have had a little problem I had with my bosses and my team. The meeting dragged on for one hour.
This That day, I come came home to late. I'm had lunched with my family (parents and my brother) and after, I went to the hairdressed hairdresser with my cousin.
I think my cousin have has a good taste. togheter Together, we choose chose the a new haircut and hairstyle.
When the barber was cutting my hair, I felt super light weigth weight but I thinked thought my hair are was very long. I felt blue for a few minutes but later, I looked more and I thinked thought it looked very good.
This That day, I went whit with my brpther and one friends at to Congress in Hotel Guarani. All my friends went and we there they were surprised and said my new look is so good.
I feel happy with my new hairstyle and I think it looks great, haha.
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