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    Retribution Rob is a selfish person,he always puts himself at first position,and never care about people's feeling.For example,one day,he went home by MRT after school.The MRT was filled of people,he sat on the Priority seat as the result.However,to people's anger,he didn't get out of the seat when an elder came across with his weak feet.All he did was staring at his Phone. Two day after,he broke his lags when he was playing basketball,and the worst is that when he got on MRT,there was a girl seating on the Priority seat and neglected he.This scene just liked a mirror reflect others feeling in Rob's mind.He finally realized what he did was totally wrong and decided to change.After that,whenever he saw people in need of help,he would refuse to help them,and become a genius person forever. I try to scribe the pics with fluency. PLZ help me to improve the article.Thanks you.
    November 8, 2015
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    谢谢!^__^

    1.大家都怕他,他一进来,大家都马上安静了。
    2.她常常几天不睡,可是一睡,睡得连续两天两夜。
    3.几个鸡蛋、几个洋葱在一起一炒,变出一个菜来。
    4.我连续几个小时没喝水,渴坏了,一喝,喝个不停。

     

    1.大家都怕他,他一进来,大家馬上就安静了。(The word "大家" has meaning "都".In chinese,the situation called "冗言贅詞" means that there were two words that have same meaning.)

    2.她常常几天不睡,可是一睡,總是连续睡两天两夜。(The word "得" tend to connect with adv.)

    3.几顆鸡蛋、几把洋葱和在一起炒,变出一道菜来。(The Quantifiers were wrong!)

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    October 30, 2015
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    A happiness of life It's said that happiness is everywhere.In the other word,happiness is easy to be created but hard to be explored.I'd say that the key to define if you happy or not is all up to your mind.If you're a person who is satisfied easily you seldom feel depress or negative.If you're a ambitious person,however,it's hard to make you feel happy and positive,because it costs a lot to satisfy you.So,how to explore happiness in the life?I'll give a story for example. It's a normal day that I was rushing to cram school.The bus would arrive in seven minutes,as the result,I felt nervous and afraid to miss it.Normally,there were only two possible situations going to happen.First and worst,I would miss it and stare it going with anger,in that case,I would be late for the class.Another situation was that I would be able to catch the bus,however,I would arrive the station too early and make myself very wet.But to my surprised,It was my day that I caught the bus just on time,In this case,I would not only be guaranteed that I wouldn't be late,but also keep myself in a dry clothe. This simple story may sound normal.But for me.It is enough to make me satisfied and feel very happy.So,the conclusion is that happiness never leave you away.It may hide behind a normal story,and be waiting for you to explore.
    October 25, 2015
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