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Retribution Rob is a selfish person,he always puts himself at first position,and never care about people's feeling.For example,one day,he went home by MRT after school.The MRT was filled of people,he sat on the Priority seat as the result.However,to people's anger,he didn't get out of the seat when an elder came across with his weak feet.All he did was staring at his Phone. Two day after,he broke his lags when he was playing basketball,and the worst is that when he got on MRT,there was a girl seating on the Priority seat and neglected he.This scene just liked a mirror reflect others feeling in Rob's mind.He finally realized what he did was totally wrong and decided to change.After that,whenever he saw people in need of help,he would refuse to help them,and become a genius person forever. I try to scribe the pics with fluency. PLZ help me to improve the article.Thanks you.

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