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はじめまして!私の日本語はわるいです。しかし、習たい。〜 話してください!あなたの英語を助ける。 :)
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    私について 嬉しいです!天気は寒いなります。寒さ好きです。:) 芽キャベツ、大根、キャベツ、と韮を庭に植えります。植えるを見える、わくわくした! 私の趣味はアニメを見える、とお茶を飲む、と園芸、と日本語を学ぶです。 園芸を特に大好き。 私のトマトのプラントのピクチャをアタッチします。<3
    October 20, 2015
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    Introducing myself

    Hello! I am Chihiro and Japanese learning English and Italian. I would like to improve my language skills.

    I'm crazy about traveling, especially Europe. However, I've never been to an Asian country except Japan, even though I'm really into trips.
    Also, taking photos (or "photography") is one of my hobbies.

    I just noticed that I always use "I" when I begin to write sentences in English. I guess it's too simple and boring for everyone reading it... Does anyone have any idea how I can begin to write?

    Also, I'm fond of watching movies these days. Could you let me know your recommendations? English one might be better for me! My favourite one is "Life is beautiful(La vita è bella)", an Italian film.

    Thank you for reading and please let me know my grammar mistakes.

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    Your English is amazing! I completely understood everything you wrote. You only had a few punctuation mistakes. Very good!

     

    Comments:

    *You can combine "I am" into "I'm" for a more natural sounding conversation.

    *Instead of saying you take photos you can say "photography is my hobby" that's what the hobby of taking photos is called.

    * Your sentences don't ALL begin with "I" and it was not boring to read. :)

    *One of my favorite movies in English is this----> http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1440161/

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    October 20, 2015
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    This is a writing exercise.

    If we could read the others' minds, we would lose almost all of our relationships.

    All of us lie not only to harm others, but also to maintain our relationships peacefully.

    To tell a harsh reality sometimes would harm a person.

    Therefore, the ability to read the others' mind would be like a terrible curse which breaks our relationships.

     

     

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    グッジョブ!!わずかあやまりです。私の日本語悪い、すみません。がんばれ!:)

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    October 20, 2015
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    はじめまして!〜 私の日本語はいいないです。ひとりで日本語を勉強する。4犬を持っています。動物大好き!
    October 20, 2015
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