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Introducing myself Hello! I am Chihiro and Japanese learning English and Italian. I would like to improve my language skills. I'm crazy about traveling, especially Europe. However, I've never been to an Asian country except Japan even though I'm really into trips. Also, taking photos is one of my hobbies. I just noticed that it's always "I" when I begin to write sentences in English. I guess it's too simple and boring for everyone reading it... Does anyone have any idea how I can begin to write? Also, I'm fond of watching movies these days. Could you let me know your recommendations? English one might be better for me! My favourite one is "Life is beautiful(La vita è bella)", an Italian film. Thank you for reading and please let me know my grammar mistakes.

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Introducing myself

Hello! I am Chihiro and I am (or; I'm) Japanese. I am learning English and Italian. I would like to improve my language skills.

I'm crazy about traveling, especially Europe. However, I've never been to an Asian country, except Japan, even though I'm really into trips.
Also, taking photos is one of my hobbies.

I have (or; I've) just noticed that it's always "I" when I begin to write sentences in English. I guess it's too simple and boring for everyone reading it... Does anyone have any idea how I can begin to write?

Also, I'm fond of watching movies these days. Could you let me know your recommendations? English one might be better for me! My favourite one is "Life is beautiful(La vita è bella)", an Italian film.

Thank you for reading and please let me know my grammar mistakes.

 

(To start sentences you could try using; "The", "My", "A while ago" (Or any time period), "In" (For example: In school, the teachers...), "Whilst" (Whilst I was in Europe, I visited...), etc.

Try thinking of what you want to say and then using each of these sentence openers to practice changing the sentence to fit what you want to say,

for example:

The moment I got off the plane, I was struck with cold air.

My body felt the cold air as soon as i got off the plane.

A while ago, after getting off the plane, I felt the cold air hit me.

In England, you can feel the cold air as soon as you step off the plane.

Whilst getting off the plane, I was hit by the cold air.


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Introducing myself

Hello! I am Chihiro and Japanese learning English and Italian. I would like to improve my language skills.

I'm crazy about traveling, especially Europe. However, I've never been to an Asian country except Japan, even though I'm really into trips.
Also, taking photos (or "photography") is one of my hobbies.

I just noticed that I always use "I" when I begin to write sentences in English. I guess it's too simple and boring for everyone reading it... Does anyone have any idea how I can begin to write?

Also, I'm fond of watching movies these days. Could you let me know your recommendations? English one might be better for me! My favourite one is "Life is beautiful(La vita è bella)", an Italian film.

Thank you for reading and please let me know my grammar mistakes.

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Your English is amazing! I completely understood everything you wrote. You only had a few punctuation mistakes. Very good!

 

Comments:

*You can combine "I am" into "I'm" for a more natural sounding conversation.

*Instead of saying you take photos you can say "photography is my hobby" that's what the hobby of taking photos is called.

* Your sentences don't ALL begin with "I" and it was not boring to read. :)

*One of my favorite movies in English is this----> http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1440161/

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