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I am just a dude trying to learn Japanese before I visit in December. Ultimately I plan on moving sometime in the future after I graduate from my university.
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    Last weekend

    I went to xxxx with a friend last weekend. He was supposed to buy a PC from a guy on *craigslist so we went there to meet him by car. My friend drove a car. After that, we went to a sushi restaurant. That restaurant didn’t look a sushi restaurant but look that looked like a night pub. That restaurant has had dark lighting, a fancy interior and a DJ playing. I liked that atmosphere. We had some sushi rolls and chicken wings.

    * craigslist a classified advertisements website with sections devoted to jobs, housing

     

    Although the 5th sentence is correct, you want to keep the same tense for the whole paragraph because you are talking about last weekend.

     

    I am going to write a journal in Japanese within the next few days. If you have time, could you correct it? My Japanese is sort of bad.

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    October 20, 2015
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    Here's a quick tip. When you have a word like infinity or eternity, the word changes when it goes before another word to describe it.

    so:

    infinity tsukuyomi

    becomes:

    infinite tsukuyomi

    and:

    eternity tsukuyomi

    becomes:

    eternal tsukuyomi

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    October 20, 2015
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    I think this is what you were trying to say? Hope this helps.

     

    Hi friends. I come from a very small village named Ziro. I find my friends studying in cities and towns speaking fluent English.which I envy a lot I envy my friends studying in cities and towns who can speak English fluently. I too want to speak English well so that I can exist within be with my friends. so This is why I have joined italkie with a hope.

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    October 20, 2015
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    Good job, you were very close.

    Manners and etiquette in my country:

    In my country, even in this day and age, traditional etiquette still remains. For instance, if an elderly person gets on the bus, or a woman holds a baby with in her arms, you should offer your seat. When you are invited to a private home for dinner, it might be nice to bring a bouquet of flowers or a box of chocolates for your host or hostess. It's not proper to bring an expensive gift, which might leads to be embarrassing to the host or hostess.

    In my childhood, my grandfather had taught me the rules of polite behavior. Wash your hands before dinner. No talking at the dinner table. No talking with your mouth full! It's inappropriate to leave food on your plate. Of course, it's perfectly acceptable to ask for more food. Forbidden bad manners! Bad manners are forbidden! No smoking! No stealing! No bad words! Always be honest  To be honest forever!

    As I grow up, I realize I am who I am because of my grandfather. When I grow up, I find who I am trained by grandfather. I appreciate him very much, , really. because I realize how important he was in making me a what a great happiness to be a good, honest person!

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    October 20, 2015
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    Good job.

     

    About a class in my school ①

    In a class, we are required to make a website and learn how to release a website from scratch. We are given some fake clients and choose one of those.

    First, we do some research about the client such as their business, industry, competitors, goals, budget and so on.

    Next, we make a plan. After that, we make a site map, wireframe and mockup.

    Sitemap is an overview of pages in a website. It offers links to all the pages.
    Wireframe is a simple visual guide to show you what a web page would look like. It is an important step in design process.
    Mockups are built on top of wireframes and go further to show the overall appearance aspect of a design. It can visualize the content and demonstrate the basic functionalities. It should be as close as possible. It's like a demo.

    Basically we create those before coding.

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    October 20, 2015
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