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Last weekend I went to xxxx with a friend last weekend. He was supposed to buy PC from a guy on *craigslist so we went there to meet him by car. My friend drove a car. After that, we went to sushi restaurant. That restaurant didn’t look a sushi restaurant but look a night pub. That restaurant has dark lighting, fancy interior and DJ playing. I liked that atmosphere. We had some sushi rolls and chicken wing. * craigslist a classified advertisements website with sections devoted to jobs, housing

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Last weekend

I went to xxxx with a friend last weekend. He was supposed to buy a PC from a guy on *craigslist so we went there to meet him by car. My friend drove a car. After that, we went to a sushi restaurant. That restaurant didn’t look a sushi restaurant but look that looked like a night pub. That restaurant has had dark lighting, a fancy interior and a DJ playing. I liked that atmosphere. We had some sushi rolls and chicken wings.

* craigslist a classified advertisements website with sections devoted to jobs, housing

 

Although the 5th sentence is correct, you want to keep the same tense for the whole paragraph because you are talking about last weekend.

 

I am going to write a journal in Japanese within the next few days. If you have time, could you correct it? My Japanese is sort of bad.

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