- Hey there, please check the answer below to your question! Also, you're doing very well with your English writing and sentences. Keep it up! I hate to waste time with new things that I have never done before. For example, I believe that I will travel some where soon. It's too hard to research things though, such as the hotels, the locations, the restaurants, and so forth. On the other hand, it's so simple if I were to go to familiar places.0 votedNovember 2, 20170
today's diary (2017-10-31)
Hello there, you're doing great with your English learning! I read through your note entry and applied an additional way you could have written the conversation below. Hopefully this helps you out even more.
Today, I was speaking with my friend whom I met on this site :)
She is a student and much younger than me. During our conversation, she desires to visit my country of Korea. So, I recommended an exchange student to her. I said "It would be a great opportunity". She said, "하고 싶어요".
I went on to say, "back in high school I didn't have any dreams. If I had gone at that time, I would have been an energetic student, but nothing is impossible".
Good fortune,
Lenn
0 votedNovember 1, 20172- Korean Language Learning Journey 안녕하세요. 모든 게 잘 되길 바래요. 나는 한국어를 배우고 있고, 때때로 그것은 나의 모국어가 아니기 때문에 힘들다. 그럼에도 불구하고, 나는 이 여정을 계속할 것이다. 만약 내가 그것을 어렵게 본다면, 그것은 어려울 것이다. 그래서 그것은 관점으로 귀결된다. 자 한다!, 자 시작한다! Good evening. I hope all is well. I've been learning Korean and it's tough at times because this isn't my Native language. Regardless, I will continue on this journey. If I see it as difficult, then it will be difficult. So it boils down to perspective. Here goes!November 1, 201722
Love trumps hate
I hope that love trumps hate within me. I'm very afraid that my anger explode. I had a trouble to controll my emotion in the past. It was cause of my family trouble. It is calm down lately, but I might not be able to controll. I believe God save me from this issue.Good job! Please read below.
Corrections
The word control was misspelled and there is a bit of sentence fragmenting present as well. With this, I’ve made the corrections and also showed another way of expressing your thoughts in written form for this topic.
Love Trumps Hate
I truly hope that love trumps hate within me. I’m fearful my anger will explode one day and cause me to backtrack on my journey of healing. In the past because of family problems, I had trouble controlling my emotions and would lose it. I have calmed down lately, but I’m still concerned I might not be able to control myself in the future. I pray God will deliver and help me overcome this battle.
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