Love trumps hate
I hope that love trumps hate within me. I'm very afraid that my anger explode. I had a trouble to controll my emotion in the past. It was cause of my family trouble. It is calm down lately, but I might not be able to controll. I believe God save me from this issue.
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Love trumps hate
I hope that love trumps hate within me. I'm very afraid that my anger explode. I had a trouble to controll my emotion in the past. It was cause of my family trouble. It is calm down lately, but I might not be able to controll. I believe God save me from this issue.Good job! Please read below.
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Love Trumps Hate
I truly hope that love trumps hate within me. I’m fearful my anger will explode one day and cause me to backtrack on my journey of healing. In the past because of family problems, I had trouble controlling my emotions and would lose it. I have calmed down lately, but I’m still concerned I might not be able to control myself in the future. I pray God will deliver and help me overcome this battle.
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