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    这是我一个星期五

    你好! 你好吗?
    今天星期五,我不去学校,数以我去我的朋友的家。他住在河内,在大学宿舍。可是我不知道他住几楼,几门,多少房间,数以我给他打电话。他说他住在三楼一门号码的房间是301. 他的房间很美,很多书,他喜欢读,我也喜欢读。
    中午我们去食堂吃饭。在食堂,我们见他的一个朋友,他给我他的朋友,他的名字是麦克。 麦克是留学生,他是美国人。麦克很高和白,他很帅哈哈。他们是同班同学,他们在律大学学习法律。麦克也住在律大学的宿舍。我觉得法律很难,我说"你们觉得法律怎么样?" 他们说"比较容易"... 我不知道。。。他们说汉语很难,写汉字最难,他们对了。。
    吃饭了,麦克说他要去银行还钱,数以我们去银行。 他要换万美元,很多!!。然后我们回家,吃饭,明天见!

     

    数所以我去我的朋友的家--的here can be ignore so you may find the sentence is better.

    可是我不知道他住几楼,几门,多少房间--you can say like this 可是我不知道他住在哪一层楼和房间号,I don't which floor and room does he live?Do you want to express this?

    数所以我给他打电话

     他说他住在三楼一门号码的房间是301--you can say 他说他住在三楼的301房间,this is more concise.

    他喜欢读,我也喜欢读--you can say 他喜欢读书,我也是 or 我和他一样喜欢读书,you and he like reading,bu t in Chinese you must add something what you like,so others can understand.

    他给我他的朋友--他给我介绍他的朋友

    ... 我不知道。。。--what do you want to say?Do you want to say "I don't why the law is simple?"

    他们对了。。---Do you want to express what they said is right?If so,you should say,他们说的是对的 or 我也觉得他们是对的。You should appoint what is right?

    吃饭了--you mean after the lunch/dinner or during the lunch/dinner?

    他要换万美元--there are different means between 换 and 还?换 means exchange, 还 means repayment。

     

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    November 18, 2015
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    My job (please help you correct it attached Chinese) I have a job in sales online,which is called electronic commerce.In this business,we usually find custome in Google.We search in the internet to find audience's website and their e-mail in it.Then I will send our introduce letter to him.Generally I don't get reply.May be my letter has been seem as spam.So I work to find some tips to solve this problem. 我是一名电商销售。在这个行业中,我们在谷歌上面找客户。我们找到客户的网站并获取里面的邮箱,然后我发开发信给他。一般我都没能获得回信,也许是被当作垃圾邮件,所以我希望找个方法解决这个问题。
    November 9, 2015
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    November 9, 2015
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    I think English is so hard to learn. I am studying English and recite vocabulary everyday. I listen to VOA carefully again and again in order to make sure every word is clear for me. But it seems not work for me.So guys,how do you learn English usually?
    November 7, 2015
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    Electronic commerce B2B is short for business to business sale.It's difficult to find a company and pattern without using electronic technology and internet.So electronic commerce(E-commerce) includes all of things.It improve its traditional business work's function and efficiency by electronic technology and internet.
    October 31, 2015
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    October 26, 2015
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    My Thoughts For Today

    今天工作很好(顺利,What do you want to express 好,there many meaning of "好",“顺利” means the work is smooth and nothing problem),没什么特别的. 下午, 我們雇用新的員工. 明天是新員工第一天在工作, 她要規劃我們的空間設計jì. 明天下班後, 可以在这里(活动 is verb,before that youo should add some place where you want to act)活動, 我想會跟朋友打籃球(,can be omited)還是打羽毛球.

     

    if any question please feel free to contac me.

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    October 23, 2015
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    a new day It's a nice weather today. I get up at 6:45 today.Then I wash my face and tooth. I go to the playground for running on Friday every week. There are so many people on the ground.The students are practising running for engaging the competition under their teacher's coach.Tens of elderly people are dancing in the music.Some women are playing badminton. I run around the playground which 200 meters a circle.I run 6 rounds and feel tired.My head is full with sweat and I walk back home.
    October 23, 2015
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    a new day It's a nice weather today. I get up at 6:45 today.Then I wash my face and tooth. I go to the playground for running on Friday every week. There are so many people on the ground.The students are practising running for engaging the competition under their teacher's coach.Tens of elderly people are dancing in the music.Some women are playing badminton. I run around the playground which 200 meters a circle.I run 6 rounds and feel tired.My head is full with sweat and I walk back home.
    October 23, 2015
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    I'd like to join,may i

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    October 21, 2015
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