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correct my text in English😊
recently Lately, I have been studying I'm studying even more for my final exams. I can't believe I've turned in to a book wormmmm!!!🤓😂🤣 and also, I've never studied THIS MUCH in my whole life. I wanna get some sleep😭 I need some rest😑
I just wish i to finish my school sooner so I can have some free time again! Ugh, I want my life back☹
OK, yeah...this is what I mostly feel right now. all this situation is soooooo overwhelming! . . .
but sometimes I just sit and think about all the difficulties and things that I've been through so far!--
I think about how small these problems are in reality😂 and the interesting thing is... when I compare the struggles I have about school, with the struggles in my life (especially the other people's lives) I laugh and I just say to myself: why can't you be more patient? why don't you just stop all of this nagging and sadness and try to live at in the moment and enjoy the good days???🤔
you know, life has its own ups and downs; sometimes you have fun with it, sometimes you feel happier, sometimes your plans don't work out.
so yeah! Do you see??? sometimes the most awful things might happen to us but we gotta be strong....we just gotta move on, be positive and enjoy this journey.
it's not about how we get to the top of this mountain; it's the climb.
So...who cares about homework, job, money or debts, family issues or relationship issues, etc?? why do we even have to CARE when we know we only live once!?ll
Life's beautiful--enjoy it!😊
OKayyyyyy.... now how do u guys think about my English?😁😁
does it sound awkward or does it suck? plz tell me how do u feel about it😁You have an extremely engaging voice! I really enjoyed reading your entry. I hope my corrections were clear. I highlighted changes and corrections. At the beginning of a sentence, you have to use a capital letter in formal English. Please let me know if you have any questions. Enjoy the rest of your weekend! Bobbi
0 votedJune 1, 20191Golden No.38 Experience
Describe one of your challenging experiences. Explain why it is challenging and how you conquered this challenge. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
One of my challenging experiences is was a ballroom dance at university. When I was a university student, I used to be in on a ballroom dance team. I started it since upon entering university and tried hard, but I didn't achieve a the result I wanted at first. As I did not want to give up improving, so I made an a greater effort more than anyone else and reviewed my weaknesses shortcomings many times in on video. As a result, I won an award for the last competition. From this experience, I learned about the importance of patience. That's why the ballroom dance at university is the most challenging experience to for me.0 votedJune 1, 20192To do nothing
When We don’t do anything, we do a lot, because in those moments we can share those moments we with our relatives--our children, wife spouse or friends. Those moments of leisure are moments that you will remember all your life. All Everything doesn’t isn't about working and studying, you have put a on priority on the people you love and who and the people that you loves you. The time is priceless and it is the best gift that you can give.To Do Nothing
When we don't do anything, we do a lot because we can share those moments with our relatives--our children, spouse or friends. Those moments of leisure are moments that you will remember all your life. Everything isn't about working and studying; you have to put a priority on the people you love and who love you. Time is priceless and it is the best gift that you can give.
I tried not to change your writing style/ voice too much. It is not necessarily correct to switch pronouns, but it is okay for informal writing. Please let me know if you have other questions.
Bobbi
0 votedJune 1, 20192Help(question)
Hi, there
Should I say
I can’t do (or make it??) any day other than Monday” or “I can’t do(make it?) another day but Monday” or “I can’t do(make it??) another day besides Monday”?
Which of THESE is right?
Thank youHello Gabriel, You can say either "I can't make any day other than Monday" or "I can't do any day other than Monday." The latter is little more colloquial--less formal. We would not say "another day" in this sentence. We would use "another day" to say "We can do it another day," for example. I hope that is helpful. Please let me know if you have any other questions. Bobbi
0 votedJune 1, 20193I cut my hair last nigth night
Last nigth, night, i I cut my hair :3 (What does :3 mean?)
Now it is short. My mother is annoyed annoying because she says my hair was long and beautiful she says. Well... my sister it will sell it.
Now i I feel more confortable comfortable. Maybe next week I will be sorry. repents me.0 votedOctober 18, 20160A little about me. It tends to be self-centered.
I am a very shy guy who lives in Brazil's southeastern region. I'm twenty-two years old and I don't know whether I should be proud or ashamed of never having been being in a relationship yet. before
I would like to write more, but I'm out of time. Please correct any mistakes in this text. could have. Anyone!
Thanks in advance.0 votedOctober 18, 20160Someone could correct me please !
Could someone correct me, please?!!
California in the 19th century, Chinese immigrants had no right to vote and could not marry who they wanted.In California during the 19th century, Chinese immigrants had no right to vote and could not marry whom they wanted.
To combat racism, there should be bonuses for political parties to black candidates.To combat racism, political parties should give bonuses to black candidates.
It was once believed that people of different races could never understand each other.
When you go in a place occupied by blacks, listen and learn from those that you will ever experience. (Which have an experience you can not know)When you go to a place inhabited by blacks, listen and learn from them as they have experienced things you have not.
And if what they say or how they say puts you evil for help, the better!And if what they say or how they say it makes you upset . . . all the better!
(I am not sure exactly what you were trying to say in the last line, so I made my best guess.)
0 votedOctober 18, 20160Who am i
Hi! I'm Yang and I'm a 38-year-old Chinese woman.Nice to meet you.
I'm learning American English. My English <font style="background-color: yellow;">sucks</font> (is not so good). But, I like English. I wish I could speak it more fluently.
I live in Sichuan Meishan. It's a little (small) city. It's beautiful and quiet and I like it.
I have a fourteen-year-old son. He is a cute (handsome) boy. He likes to play computer games. I love him.Notes: The slang term "sucks" is appropriate only in very casual settings. It can be considered vulgar, so be careful where you use it.
Although "little city" is technically correct, we more often say "small city."
For a boy that age, almost a man, we would refer to him as handsome rather than cute.
I hope that is helpful.
0 votedMay 10, 20161A Small Shop near my House
There's a fruit shop near my house. Its name is "Belissima Casa di Frutas". The colors out front are white and green. It's open 12 (twelve) hours a day, from 7:00 am to 7:00 pm. It's an expensive shop, but the fruits are (fruit is) really good. And it is the only one in the neighborhood. The people who work there are very nice and friendly.Note--"its" is the possessive, as in, something or someone belonging to an object or animal.
"It's" is the neuter pronoun plus the verb to be; a contraction for "it is."
You may already know that, so I am sorry if it is obvious to you.
Enjoy your evening!
Bobbi
0 votedMay 10, 20160Exchange English-German/German -English
Hi Everybody, (Capitalize whom you are addressing.)
Is anybody fond (or interested in) of practicing conversation in German and offering conversation in English in exchange? The idea is talking via Skype roughly once a week or more for one hour.
Looking forward meeting you,
JochenYou might also say, "Is anyone interested in a German/ English conversational exchange?"
I hope that helps.
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