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A small shop near my house. There's a fruit shop near my house. It name is "Belissima Casa di Frutas". The front colors are white and green. It's open 12 (twelve) hours a day, from 7.00am to 7.00pm. It's an expensive shop, but the fruits are really good. And is the onlyone in the neighborhood. The people who work there are very good and friendly.

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A small shop near my house.

There's a fruit shop near my house. Its name is [or, It is called] "Belissima Casa di Frutas". The front is painted white and green. It's open 12 (twelve) hours a day, from 7.00am to 7.00pm. It's an expensive shop, but the fruits are really good. And it is the only one in the neighborhood. The people who work there are very good [nice] and friendly.

 

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Hi Carine. There's nothing like getting fresh fruit from a local store! I've marked punctuation and spelling corrections in yellow, phrasing corrections in blue, and contextual vocabulary corrections in magenta.

 

I corrected "good" to "nice" because normally in this context you would be talking about how they behave towards you, and not necessarily about their character. If you wanted to talk about their character, you would probably say "they are good people".

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A small shop near my house.

There's a fruit shop near my house. Its name is "Belissima Casa di Frutas". The front colors are white and green. It's open 12 (twelve) hours a day, from 7.00am to 7.00pm. It's an expensive shop, but the fruits are really good. And [it's or it is] is the only one in the neighborhood. The people who work there are very good and friendly.


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A Small Shop near my House

There's a fruit shop near my house. Its name is "Belissima Casa di Frutas". The colors out front are white and green. It's open 12 (twelve) hours a day, from 7:00 am to 7:00 pm. It's an expensive shop, but the fruits are (fruit is) really good. And it is the only one in the neighborhood. The people who work there are very nice and friendly.

 Note--"its" is the possessive, as in, something or someone belonging to an object or animal.

"It's" is the neuter pronoun plus the verb to be; a contraction for "it is."

You may already know that, so I am sorry if it is obvious to you.

Enjoy your evening!

Bobbi 

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