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    Stadiumred Group

    Stadiumred Group {https://stadiumredgrou.listal.com/} is a global marketing agency <em>holding</em> (<em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">need more info here)</em><em> </em>Communication Company with a rich history that started in the music industry and evolved over the past 25 years. The company is known for its innovative ideas and <em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">(adjective here to describe the approach)</em> _______ approach to marketing, and has worked on four Grammy-winning projects in its first three years of operation.


    * I think you need more info about "Communication Company" because, even though this is a proper noun, it is hard to understand if this is a business name...

    Overall, using adjectives and being a little more specific will help to customize your description of Stadiumred.


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    October 7, 2019
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    Long time no use this site.... 

    I haven't used this site in a long time... 

    but I have returned to Italki today! I came back to this site today!

    I feel that my English level has gone went down, down, down....I am feeling very sad so I want to use English as much as I can in my daily life.
    Especially speaking!

    Today, one of my friends living in London phoned me after 5 years,. He said to me that "Your English is Japanese English now. Come back to London!"
    I know that (my language level has gone down) and am feeling upset.

    I came back here before coming back to London!  (I don't know what you mean with this statement.) 


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    Don't get discouraged! Language learning is a lifelong process. I, too, struggle to keep studying and feeling confident. But it is so cool because now we have platforms like Italki where we can study, develop, and improve independently and in the privacy of our own homes. Just listen to the old idiom: "Get back on the horse" and give a good try. I am sure you will be feeling better about your English in no time. 

    Best of luck, 

    Kristen 

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    June 19, 2018
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    Do you have some books you'd like to reccomend recommend?

    I like reading books. But I don't read as much as I used to because I am busy recently.

    I like suspens suspense novels, crime novels, self-help books and comic books.
    I want to read books written in English to improve my English language skills.
    Please tell give me your reccomendation recommendations. I'll try it them!

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    I recommend that you read "A Wrinkle in Time." Google this title and I read the synopsis. It is fantastic and will definitely assist you with your language goals. 

    Best of luck, 

    Kristen

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    June 19, 2018
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    Today is a good day!

    I hear a lot of people saying what the that Monday is a "bad" day. ,  (It could be good to put a conclusion sentence here. For example "I have to disagree" or "Nonetheless, my Monday has been fantastic!") 

    I'm Brazilian and in my country here the people don't like to work hard, generally speaking...I understand with the that life is short, and, only working is not good, but, if you want a better more stable financial life, only you have to do it.



    Today is a good day!

    I hear a lot of people saying that Monday is a "bad" day. But my Monday has been fantastic!

    I'm Brazilian and in my country people don't like to work hard, generally speaking...I understand that life is short and only working is not good, but if you want a more stable financial life, you have to do work! 




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    April 23, 2018
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    Increasing ed Population

    Over the last few decades, Nowadays, the population of the world has increased dramatically in almost every country. the most countries all over the world.This is totally true for the both developed and developing countries. There is no doubt that overpopulation will cause different a loads of problems. However, the governments can solved these problems by taking action. doing something.

    There are several problems that the rising raising number of people in third world countries may cause causes. Firstly, it is very difficult to provide enough food all of the people. Secondly, the governments can limits the number of children per family to be educated in school. In addition, in poor zones usually, have a significant serious unemployment rate. as well and w When As the population increases, the rate number of unemployment will increase. Finally, when too many people live in one area on the land the environment can suffers in terms of soil and air contamination (pollution).


    Gohkan, 

    Nice analysis of over-population! Looks like there is a slight issue with your tenses. I can see how it is confusing, but one way to remember is that the population is still increasing each day. It is even increasing as I read your writing ;) Therefore, you need to check your use of "will" and "can" and continuous tenses. 

    Also: 

    • Review the difference between raise and rise 

    • Review punctuation (commas)

    • Review definite and indefinite articles


    Best of luck with your English studies! Things are looking great. Keep up the good work. 

    -Kristen 

      

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    November 17, 2017
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    My diary - 10

    I have a really big passion. This is soccer. I am very passionate about soccer. 
    Every weekend, I play soccer with my friends for pleasure. with my friends soccer with pleasure. When you spend a lot of time at the computer and have sedentary lifestyle, soccer is a good oppotrunity to get some physical activity.
    And Of course, I also watch soccer. My favorite football club is Juventus from Torino, Italy. I have been a am fan of this Italian football club since 2003.
    Over the last 3 years, Juventus has played in the final round of the Champions League 2 times. Unfortunately, the team lost both time.

     2 times for last 3 years Juventus has played in final of the Champions League, but both times we lost.

    However, I look with optimism to in the next season and I really hope, that we can finally win finally this trophy, for the first time in the 21st. C century.

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    July 11, 2017
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    a dialoog  A dialogue 

    Ann:Who do you think is the happiest in the world?

    Albert:I think the emperor is the happiest man in the world.
    Ann:What an interesting idea. Why do you think so?
    Albert:The reason is simple, because he has a lot of money, he has nothing to worry about.
    Ann:So, you think, the richer you are, the happier you are?
    Albert:Yes.
    Ann:Money is not everything. Money can't buy everything you want.
    Albert:Like what?(what can money not buy?)
    Ann:Healthy Good health. No matter how much money you have, you can't buy health.
    Albert:Go on!
    Ann:Jobs (Steve Jobs?) has a lot of money, but he couldn't can't "pay" to keep away disease. get his health from the disease. So, Also, happiness doesn't require really need a lot of money. Compared with those who are seriously ill, you are very happy.
    Albert:After hearing your ideas, I now know that I was wrong! As you said, I felt I was wrong.

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    June 14, 2017
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    Born too late to explore the earth.

    Born too early ealry to explore the universe.
    Born at just the right in time to learn a language online!
    But still, learning another language can be real tough, right? :p





    are we too early to explore the universe? what a poet you are -- nice work! 

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    June 14, 2017
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    What I think about fashion

    I think fashion is an art form  one of the arts because fashion gives us the chance to express ourselves, to show others our status and our thoughts.  that we can show our status,thinking.
    We usually can usually identify someone's interests, likes, and style simply by looking at their fashion choices. recognize just looking their fashion the person what they like,and what they want to do.
    With some people, one might be able to guess see them their personalities too.
    And (try not to start sentences with 'and') Also, I suppose think fashion is a way to express is promoting our feelings.
    Do  Have you have had such an experience where which your favorite items made makes your feelings good or gives gave some encourages encouragement to you?
    So I want to say In my opinion, fashion, our feelings, and our thoughts interact with thinking interacts each others.
    I mean, we can make create our own fashion style , but at the same time fashion makes ours  us who we are. 


    NICE WORK! I would love to read more about your opinions on fashion and which styles match with which personalities. Keep writing! I will be on the look out ;) 

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    May 25, 2017
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    Describe my friend  Description of my friend

    My manager is a most beautiful woman girl. She is older than me, but she looks so young. She is a medium height  high and slim girl. She has got a short brown hair and big black eyes that make her look like Indian. She is a funny person that gets along with everyone around her. girl that makes people like around her. wWhen I first met her, we talked the first time I have talk to her so much. We have many similar hobby hobbies, such as English,  and traveling..... She has I changed my mind and I have learned many things from her.
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    April 11, 2017
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