Increased Population
Nowadays, the population of world increase dramatically in most countries all over the world.This is totally true for the both developed and developing countries. There is no doubt that overpopulation cause different a loads of problems. However the governments can solved these problems by doing something.
There are several problems that the raising number of people in third countries causes. Firstly, it is very difficult to provide enough food all people. Secondly, the governments limits the number of children per family to educate in school. In addition, in poor zones usually have a serious unemployment rate as well and when the population increase, the number of unemployment will increase.
Finally, when too many people live on the land the environment can suffers in term of soil and air contamination.
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Increasing ed Population
Over the last few decades, Nowadays, the population of the world has increased dramatically in almost every country. the most countries all over the world.This is totally true for the both developed and developing countries. There is no doubt that overpopulation will cause different a loads of problems. However, the governments can solved these problems by taking action. doing something.There are several problems that the rising raising number of people in third world countries may cause causes. Firstly, it is very difficult to provide enough food all of the people. Secondly, the governments can limits the number of children per family to be educated in school. In addition, in poor zones usually, have a significant serious unemployment rate. as well and w When As the population increases, the rate number of unemployment will increase. Finally, when too many people live in one area on the land the environment can suffers in terms of soil and air contamination (pollution).
Gohkan,
Nice analysis of over-population! Looks like there is a slight issue with your tenses. I can see how it is confusing, but one way to remember is that the population is still increasing each day. It is even increasing as I read your writing ;) Therefore, you need to check your use of "will" and "can" and continuous tenses.
Also:
• Review the difference between raise and rise
• Review punctuation (commas)
• Review definite and indefinite articles
Best of luck with your English studies! Things are looking great. Keep up the good work.
-Kristen
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