The Internet

As the [number of internet] user[s] of the internet are growing [grows], the problem[s]  occurs in many cases. Regardless of these circumstances [this], I believe that the internet benefits society. By using the internet, we can easily contact [connect] with other countries' resources*. [For example,] if some company want[s] to start [a] new business in a [foreign] country**, they can search [for employees] by searching web sites, and if necessary, they can contact local people on the internet. In addition, the internet provide[s]  lots of useful tools for very [at a very] low costs, therefore those who want to study but not [cannot] afford to do [so] can study many subjects, which will help get rid of the disparity of studying conditions***.

*other countries' resources makes more sense as resources in other countries.

**start a new business in a foreign country reads more easily if replaced with expand into a foreign market.

***studying conditions makes more sense as education quality.