The Internet
As the user of the internet are growing, the problem occurs in many cases. Regardless of these circumstances, the internet benefits society. By using the internet, we can easily contact with other countries' resources. If some company want to start new business in a country, they can search by searching web sites and if necessary, they can contact local people on the internet. In addition, the internet provide lots of useful tools for very low costs, therefore those who want to study but not afford to do can study many subjects,which will help get rid of the disparity of studying conditions.
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The Internet
As the [number of internet] user[s] of the internet are growing [grows], the problem[s] occurs in many cases. Regardless of these circumstances [this], I believe that the internet benefits society. By using the internet, we can easily contact [connect] with other countries' resources*. [For example,] if some company want[s] to start [a] new business in a [foreign] country**, they can search [for employees] by searching web sites, and if necessary, they can contact local people on the internet. In addition, the internet provide[s] lots of useful tools for very [at a very] low costs, therefore those who want to study but not [cannot] afford to do [so] can study many subjects, which will help get rid of the disparity of studying conditions***.*other countries' resources makes more sense as resources in other countries.
**start a new business in a foreign country reads more easily if replaced with expand into a foreign market.
***studying conditions makes more sense as education quality.
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