| Last month | Last 3 months | All time | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Completed lessons | 3 | 9 | 83 |
| Attendance rate | 100% | 100% | 97% |
- Theme park tripThe last time I went to a theme park<s>,</s> was when I was ten/twelve years old. It was a trip with a few friends and an instructor.I remember the ticket booth was full and we had to wait in a<s>n</s> huge queue, so we started complaining about it in a childish manner. The ride part happened to be amazing. We scattered <s>among*</s> throughout the park and tried every attraction we could, it was fun to see someone <s>of</s> from your group in the distance. It was a water park, and <s>I’ve always been</s> I was always with a group composed of 4-5 boys, we had a lot of fun together and we came out of <s>that </s> there drenched.I remember we had a little trouble eating because it’s important to wait 2-3 hours <s>for doing a bath</s> after swimming, but apart from that, everything else was really fun.*among is better for count nouns0 votedOctober 6, 20191
- I came back <s>in </s>to JapanAfter 2 years experience in the UK, I came back <s>in</s> to Japan about 1 week ago.I would've wanted to stay in the UK <s>more</s><s style="color: rgb(153, 51, 255);"> </s>longer if my youth mobility scheme visa <s>did not</s> hadn't expired, but I had to go back to my country as I am not an EU citizen. I felt it was unfair that we couldn't stay in the UK as long as we wanted even if we worked so hard and payed a lot of tax <s>for</s> to the UK; I wish <s>If</s> I were born in an EU country, so that I could live in such a beautiful country, the UK, as long as possible.I did like the life in the UK, but there are some nice <s>points</s> things about* <s>to live</s> living in Japan, of course. First, I might not need to say it as it is obvious, but Japanese food is nicer and cheaper <s>at all</s> overall**. Every raw fish and fish roe is fresh and tasty. Also rice is delicious. We can get rice balls or whatever from convenience stores which are open <s>every</s> 24 hours a day. I know Japanese food may contain more food additives than EU countries, but I have <s>been</s> missed the taste of them so much. Second, every home appliance is quite good quality. They work very quickly and <s>calm</s> quietly(?). I believe the quality of Japanese ones <s>Japanese one's quality</s> is the best in the world. Third, I do like Japanese baths. Next week, my family is going to take me to a Japanese spa in Osaka. I am really looking forward to it!These days I <s>couldn't</s> can't*** sleep at night because of <s>a </s>jet lag. But I should start to look for a new job in Japan as soon as possible. It would be great if I <s>can</s> could find a job <s>that</s> where I <s>can</s> could use <s>my </s>the English skills I improved in the UK.*There is a way to say this and keep the words "points", I just can't think of it.**Overall means most Japanese food is better than most UK food. At all could be used if the sentence were negative.***If you're talking about the past in the UK, use "couldn't", if not, use "can't".0 votedOctober 6, 20191
- MY WEEKENDThe last weekend I´ve spend my time with my best friends.Last weekend I spent my time with my best friends. (use simple past for events with a known time (last weekend) and present perfect for an unknown time)It was funny.It was fun. (funny // chistoso, fun // divertido)We spend a good while all together.We spent a good while all together.0 votedOctober 6, 20191
- They bring food to eat at the repast. A repast is a little gathering held after the funeral. Everyone who attended eats together and gets the chance to catch up on what they've missed in each others lives. It's kind of a symbol of moving forward, and just convenient since a funeral is one of the only ways to get widespread families in town all at once.0 votedSeptember 20, 20150
the love
what is it the love? "what is love?"
The love is sweet or bitter, it's eternal or leak. Did you mean weak here? Como débil? Un "leak" es el agua que gotea.
Exist different forms of love but this is not still answer the question. "Different forms of love exist but this still does not..."
Is it only a combination of molecules in the cerebrum that produce this? (Great job with this sentence.)0 votedSeptember 20, 20152Good job with the sentences, they're all immediately understandable except for five which is a bit iffy. If you don't understand any of the corrections I made, let me know.
①When I went to the beach alone, I felt lonely because there were a lot of couples and families around me.
②We feel like we don’t fit in our class. For example, when we do a presentation in front of everyone, they are suddenly quite "quiet" and look down. It seems like they can’t see us.
③What time is the concert going to start?
④My short term "goal" would be able to talk with the girls and have a girlfriend.
⑤I thought you spoke Japanese for being considerate of me because I didn’t understand your English.
⑤I thought you were considerate of me because I didn’t understand your English, so you spoke Japanese.I thought it was considerate of you to speak Japanese because I didn't understand your English.
⑥Who’s the guy talking with you on Saturday? I wonder "if" he’s your boyfriend.
⑦I have some trouble with my English. I’m wondering "if" I would be able to understand English well in two months.
⑧Are you having fun? Yeah, I’m having fun!
⑨I have never been to ESL. I have taken "an" online English class before.
⑩You can't drink under 18 years old in your country, right? In my country, you can’t drink under 20 years old.0 votedSeptember 20, 20151- Commencement Je suppose que je devrais écrire une entrée puisque je suis nouvelle ici. Je ne sais pas de quoi écrire; peut-être je devrais nommer mes faiblesses donc que les gens peuvent m'aider mieux. Souvent, j'ai des issues avec la disposition des accents et le genre de les mots. Bien tôt j'ai des difficultés avec le grammaire aussi, mais je n'ai pas comme telles difficultés comme quand je écris en espagnol. (Pour exemple, je pense que j'ai écrit que mauvais, hahaha.) Hmmm, je suppose que c'est une entrée courte; prochain fois, je pense que j'utiliserai un prompt m'aider écris plus.September 20, 201570
