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    September 16, 2015
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    The most incredible adventure of my life

    This last month, I lived an amazing adventure, I would like to say that it was the most incredible adventure of my entire life. I travelled to the USA for one month with my friends and a group of eighty youth from Mexico and other parts of the world. It was amazing because I met all of them and shared a lot of experiences. I went to Vermont, Seattle and Washington D.C. We were there to learn skills that will help us in developing a project in our community in Mexico. I visited a lot of places such as the Space Needle, Market Place, The White House, Museums and a lot more. I stayed with a host family in Seattle and they were the most awesome people I've (ever) met. They made me feel at home. I will miss all the people I met there but right now I am really happy because I will help my community with my project and I'm going to make a change. Even if it's small I will do it!

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    September 16, 2015
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    begining exellent thing

    I love music. i think english language can help me improve my music skills and meet good people around the world. We will improve Together.

     

    Beginning an excellent thing.
    I love music. I think the English language can help me improve my music skills and meet good people from around the world. We will improve together.

     

    Apart from the small mistakes you made you did a good job. Well done! The sentences you have written are mostly correct but they are not written how an english speaker would probably write it. Below I have suggested some changes that I believe a native english speaker may write.

     

    Beginning an exciting journey.
    I love music. I believe that learning English can help me improve my musical skills as well as connect with good people from around the world. Let’s improve together!

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    September 14, 2015
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