The most incredible adventure in my life
The last month, I lived an amazing adventure, I would like to say that was the most incredible adventure of all my life. I traveled to the USA for one month wth my friends and a group of eighty youth from Mexico and other parts of the world. It was amazing because I met all of them and shared a lot of experiences. I went to Vermont, Seattle and Washington D.C. We were there for learning skills that will help us developing a project in our community (Mexico). I visited a lot of places like the Space Needle, Market Place, White house, Museums and a lot more. I stayed with a host family in Seattle and they were the most awesome people I've met, they made me feel just like home, I will miss all the people I met there but right now I am really happy because I will help my community with my project and I'm going to make a change, even if it's small I will get it!
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The most incredible adventure in my life
Last month, I had an amazing adventure. I would like to say that was the most incredible adventure of my entire life. I traveled to the USA for a month wth my friends and a group of eighty youth from Mexico and other parts of the world. It was amazing because I met all of them and shared a lot of experiences with them. I went to Vermont, Seattle, and Washington D.C. We were there in order to develop learning skills that will help us to develop a project in our community in Mexico. I visited a lot of places like the Space Needle, Market Place, the White House, Museums, and a lot more. I stayed with a host family in Seattle and they were the most amazing people I have ever met. They made me feel at home, and I will definitely miss all the people that I met there, but right now I am really happy because I will be able to help my community with the project and with it I'm going to make a change. Even if it's small, I will achieve it!
Fue escrito muy bien. Solamente corregí cosas para que fluyera mejor. Buen trabajo y estoy contento que le haya gustado su viaje aquí!
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The most incredible adventure of my life
This last month, I lived an amazing adventure, I would like to say that it was the most incredible adventure of my entire life. I travelled to the USA for one month with my friends and a group of eighty youth from Mexico and other parts of the world. It was amazing because I met all of them and shared a lot of experiences. I went to Vermont, Seattle and Washington D.C. We were there to learn skills that will help us in developing a project in our community in Mexico. I visited a lot of places such as the Space Needle, Market Place, The White House, Museums and a lot more. I stayed with a host family in Seattle and they were the most awesome people I've (ever) met. They made me feel at home. I will miss all the people I met there but right now I am really happy because I will help my community with my project and I'm going to make a change. Even if it's small I will do it!
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Hi are you from england?
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Glad you had a good trip. Good post only a few small mistakes. Keep it up!
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