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My Saturday is my favorite day. (Please helpful correction)
Saturday’s my favorite day of the week. I always sleep in sometime. (Always and sometime don't mean similar things. You have to pick one.I will use always in correction) I does not gets up until noon. Now I attend to English class. I just has a have a regular routine on Saturday. I always gets up around 6.00 A.M. I leave home by 8.00 A.M. My English class starts from at 9.00 A.M. and ends at 12.00 P.M. After I finished class, my friend and I go to eat lunch. We often eat Japanese food. Sushi is my favorite. Then we spend time at the books shop. We love to read books. After that we go shopping. Shopping with my friend is very happy pleasant. We help each other to choose a dress, a shirt and accessoryies. In the evening, I have an date appointment with my boyfriend. We go to see a movie. We always love Romantic movies. I gets back home at 10.00 P.M. Finally, I have time to relax. I plays a the game, but I do not stay up late. Later I go to bed.0 votedOctober 7, 20180- Probier mal Deutsch wieder zu sprechen Mein Gott. Es ist mehr als zehn Jahren seit ich Deutsch gesprochen habe. Ich habe noch deutsche Familie und Freunde, die irgendwann mir "Hallo" sag. Aber, Ich weiß das mein Freundschaften und Erinnerungen entfernte werden. Also, heute habe ich an Italki gewanderte. Ich hoffe das ich Leute treffen kann die Sprach austausche wollten. Ich wurde gern wieder nach Deutschland gehen. Ich weiß nicht wo, aber normalerweise ich lieber die Stadt oder Dort besuche, die sehr ruhig sind und natürliche Schönheit hat. Hat jemand ein Vorschlag?October 7, 201841
Learning Korean
I am learning English and Korean languages.
And next semester I am going to study Korean 1 in my university.
I'm very worried about it because I don't have any know the basics about it and iIt's very difficult.
I want to learn Korean because I love K-pop boyband (SHINee).
I want to know what are they are saying and what are they are writing-- or posting if it's online type.
I hope I can do it well.
Wish me good luck. Good luck on me .[emoji][emoji]Good luck ! Great job . Sometimes learning something with no background is best . Hope you have a good teacher.
0 votedNovember 22, 20161About me:
Hello, my name is Tsugu.
This is my first notebook entry.
Today, I'll introduce myself.
I live in Gumma in Japan and I'm working as a civil servaent.
I enjoy doing magic tricks, running and learning English!
I began italki yesterday.
I'd like to make some friends who want to learn Japanese and teach me English.
Please feel free to give me some comments and contact me!Hey Tsugu!
Looks like you have great English. I'm a civil servant and also into running. I don't know a lot about magic, but I saw David Blaine once. He's pretty talented. Hope you're safe. I saw there was an earthquake in Japan.
0 votedNovember 22, 20161Cuban Artist in Milan.
I met an artist in Milan. He is from Cuba. He is a friend of my friend. I was pleased that It was my first time to meet a Cuban for the first time.
He has painted such Cuban styles, which looks passionate in detail. I liked his oneswork a lot.
We talked many a lot about music, lifeliving, politics, economy and Che Guevara. Cuba has been openopened the border forto the U.S since last year. as It was the big news.
I would always love to head to Cuba. Eespecially now, because Cuba might be changed a lot in the near future.
I hope I will be there in a few years beforeuntil any big changes.Great job, Shin. I assumed that you meant you want to see Cuba before there are any major changes (last line). I'm excited to see it, too. I'd love to go before the money pours in and there is no character.
0 votedNovember 22, 20161Working Experiences(Starts from the most recent)
I agree with the other responder that you should list your job title and the place you worked. I typically use something like
Experience
Section Chief, Internal Management Documents (IMD) Program, <---Office
Servicewide Policy, Directives and Electronic Research (SPDER),<----Company
July 2013 – Present <---dates
1. Collect requirements and handle inquiries, provide viable medical evacuation/repatriation plans (via land, ferry, commercial flight and air charter) and travel assistance for clients.
2. Arrange, support and monitor the process throughout the entire case, make sure the whole operation procedures move forward (the wording here is very technical. When you say "operation procedures" do you mean medical operation? smoothly.
3. Follow up with clients on a regular basis, maintain database up-to-date. You would say update database OR maintain database, but including both sounds odd.
4. Review and supervise the performance of team members, provide monthly and quarterly KPI (don't use acronyms unless the person who is reading them knows the acronym) reports to COO(Chief Operation Officer).
5. Coordinate interdepartmentally and expand you need a "the" here or to pluralized network...add s. medical collaboration network, explore possible opportunities for potential markets. These two words are so similar is sounds redundant. I would say something like "explore (potential) market opportunities". I'm not sure whether you want to use potential or not.Job title --company- -- dates
1. Maintain and manage customers' basic data, liaise and communicate with relevant departments to standardize and streamline processes.
2. Verify accounts to make sure the actual revenue is recognized in timetimely. Not necessary change, but just listing an option.
3. Control inventory and monitor wear & tear, improve resource allocation and utilization efficiency, optimize production schedules, and reduce inventory and the negative impact on revenue.
4. Estimate the manufacturing cost, analyze the cost-benefit of investments and follow up cost reduction measures to improve profitability
Job title --company- -- dates
1.Collect and organize customers' information, cope with various inquiries, likeincluding products information, orders progresses and clearances, after-sale complaints and disputes etc.
2. According to the sales objectives, make relevant plans, operate on the website backstage (what does website backstage mean?), and assist marketing to launch promotional activities.
3. Support the accountant to check the receivable/payable payments, offer statistics paperwork.
4. Prepare quarterly sales reports, recruits guidance and training to improve customer service levels and maintain customers' satisfactory rate. sounds very robotic and I'm not sure what you mean.
Overall very great English. Sometimes in applications it pays to be more specific..I'm out of characters..0 votedNovember 21, 20161Cover Letter
Dear HR,
I would like to apply for the 【Customer Relationship Manager】position. With eight years of work experience, good communication and management ability, familiarization with meeting organizations and receptions for foreign clients, I believe I am a perfect candidate for this position.
Here are the two foreign languages that I master:
English: Fluent,standard US accent.
Spanish: Good, able to reply to emails and communicate on work-related matters.
Note: You are welcome to makeI am available for a phone call interview anytime at your convenience.
All of theThe note above is just a simple introduction. If I could have the honor to sit down in an interview with you, you will be able to know me a lot better. FinallyLast but not least, kindly find my CV in the attachment.
Yours sincerely
DerekDerek, overall good job. I would change a bit at the end. Instead saying something like you will be able to know me a lot better. I'd say something like, you can learn more about me and how I can be an asset to your business. "Last but no least" is a common expression, but it is very informal and may not be appropriate for a cover letter. Good luck if you're really applying for a job.
0 votedNovember 21, 20166Disney Film ''Moana''
I would love to watch the Disney film 'Moana'. Disney will release itbring it out in 3 days on the 23rd of November.
Everyone knows the film production company has released many fascinating adventure and dreamlike films for athe past couple of decades, since in the middle 20th century. But, to be honest, I am not a big fan of them. Their films are sometimes easy to guess what wouldwill happen to the hero and heroin from the middle to he end in my opinion, even though I truly like several Disney films.
In terms of Moana, I have been curious about the story and concept. The film company focused on indigenous people in the Eastern Pacific Ocean. I have been keen on individual indigenous traditions, tattoos and roots for a long time.
I knew that the new Disney film had been controversial since the trailer came out. However, I want to watch it including in the issues. I am looking forward to the date in which the film will be coming.Overall great job. I didn't understand the second to last sentence. I'm guessing when you refer to issues, you mean its controversial issues. Good luck and good job.
0 votedNovember 21, 20161My 1st time doing this.
I started studying English two and half years ago, by influence of a friend of mine. I took an English course for three and half years. I was studying very hard back then. I took a placement test and managed to get through 2 semesters. Now i'm on my last week. I'm going to take a MET(Michigan English Test) as my last exam this week. I want to achieve a C1 (advanced level), but i don't know if i'm capable or not. I don't enjoy studying grammar a lot. I'm more into studying in fun ways, such as: watching tv series, movies, playing online games, typing with native-speakers, so on and so forth.
After i get my certification, I'm planning to start studying French. I'm very excited for it, French sounds so fancy to me.
I forgot to mention that i intend to make a trip to USA after college( I'm finishing my degree in 2018, Computer science) and i hope to be able to communicate without any troubles.
That's it.William,
Your English is very good. Sometimes you don't break up your sentences properly. There was one sentence I was unsure of your meaning. I think you meant to say you studied hard and were able to skip two semesters, but I'm not 100% sure. Try not to continue your sentences by using "and" and but too often. I don't know the Michigan exam, but wish you good luck.
0 votedNovember 20, 20160
