In this context, "fortunes" means monetary wealth, although sometimes when used this way it could mean general luck. "Ebb and flow" means to come and go in a cycle, as the ocean tides. If your fortunes ebb and flow, you are sometimes rich and sometimes not.

...I believe I could perfect my results if I *am* selected for an interview.

Essay #352 "Practical Knowledge" 05.01.19

As education creates the basis for everyone’s future lives, it is highly important for universities to find the best way to educate students. Many people believe that theoretical knowledge is more important than and should be given a priority over practical knowledge. However, in my opinion, it is not true and practical knowledge provides more benefits and provides has a better overall effect on education overall.

Fist First of all, practical knowledge would help greatly helps students to prepare to for their future jobs by putting them in a working environment. Many universities lack this sort of education and, as a result, many students are still unprepared for work, even after getting a higher education. Because of that deficit, many students have a hard times finding their first jobs.

Another point is that theoretical knowledge is much easier to acquire, so this can be left for to students themselves. Theoretical knowledge does not require any special facilities except libraries, and with using modern technology ies such as the internet people can get almost any information they need. That is why universities should be not so focused concentrated on theoretical knowledge as this can be left on gained through self-education.

Finally, by getting an opportunity to apply their theoretical knowledge, students would learn much faster and more efficiently. Thus, by Providing students with good practical base will not only improve their experiences and let them get used to a working environment, but also allow them to apply their knowledge. This system would have a highly positive effect on their development and academic performances.

In conclusion, To conclude, in spite of the fact that theoretical knowledge is undeniably important, by concentrating more on practical skills universities can drastically improve students’ educational performances. At the same time, this will have a much better effect on their understanding of working aspects and overall job specificity [*I don't know what this means in context - job requirements or job-related skills, perhaps?]. Thus, by shifting focus from theoretical to practical knowledge, we would drastically improve our educational system and the level of education in of our society.

Seeking Asylum

Syrian people who flee war have the right to seek asylum. Their homes is still were destroyed and they are still have been tortured, kidnapped, and raped rapped. some of them The m Religious minorities in Syria their own countries are even have been forced to abandon their faith and convert to another one. Some of the refugees do not have even survived massacres. 

 

These people are just looking for a new life. Politicial ns leaders play and make shows obfuscate the issue, but as humans we should close the gab gap between what we our negative emotions toward Syrian people and the reality of their needs. We should act positively by [what do you think we should do for them?].

 

A few notes:

 

I changed the order of some of your sentences so the worst thing (death and witnessing death) is last. Stylistically you want to end with the most extreme example on your list.

 

"Did not survive massacres" doesn't sound right because "massacres" means incidents during which a lot of people were killed. Using the word "massacre" alone means some or most of those involved did not survive. "Some of the refugees even survived massacres," means they witnessed a lot of people (impliedly other Syrians) being killed, so I think it's the most economical way to express your point.

 

"Play and make shows" isn't gramatically wrong, but I don't think it has the connotation you were going for, so I changed it to "obfuscate the issue" because I thought that would be closer to what you meant. "Obfuscate" means to confuse or make something more difficult to understand. 

Birthday and Death

Yesterday afternoon when my brother came home from work, And my sister prepared a meal for him. Then my sister, my niece, my brother and I had too much a lot of fun together in living room [doing what?]. but After a while we were feeling dizzy and tired but we didn't know why. and Then, my brother changed his clothes and he went out left for the gym. 5

Five minutes later my brother came back and he was crying. alot and I saw him first while he was crying like that. And I asked him why, the reason and he said his best friend Talha, who has been and our neighboor for 8 eight years, Talha is drowned. He was so bad extremely upset. and I hugged him tightly and I tried to calm him,. But I couldn't be successful but it didn't work.

We live in Ankara, which is not near any water. There isn't sea here That is why he Talha went to Bartın for vocation vacation with 2 his two friends Yusuf and Furkan. The lifeguards warned them, These three boys were warned by lifeguards but they kept on swimming. Talha didn't know how to swim and he panicked. Fortunately Some people at the beach saved the others' lives, but Talha died. the others are saved by peoples in the place but Talha is not alive now.

 

He  Talha worked all the time at several jobs. too much full and part time. He wanted his dreams to come true. The only thing that he wants is he wanted that he didn't have was an Android. but he couldn't have. He was going supposed to go to University [in the United States we usually say "college" instead of university] five days later after he died. He was going to be an engineer like my brother. He was so lovely, generous, and respectful to everyone.

 

I can hear his parents' screams now from the window and my heart is breaking. Yesterday was his birthday and today he is gone. How can will I handle it? How can I be return to normal? I'm sooo sorry for him.

 

I don't want to see death anymore. Every day I see our soldiers dying and now it's really hurting...

I am sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful and well-written essay.