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Birthday and Death
Yesterday afternoon when my brother came home from work, And my sister prepared a meal for him. Then my sister, my niece, my brother and I had too much a lot of fun together in living room [doing what?]. but After a while we were feeling dizzy and tired but we didn't know why. and Then, my brother changed his clothes and he went out left for the gym. 5
Five minutes later my brother came back and he was crying. alot and I saw him first while he was crying like that. And I asked him why, the reason and he said his best friend Talha, who has been and our neighboor for 8 eight years, Talha is drowned. He was so bad extremely upset. and I hugged him tightly and I tried to calm him,. But I couldn't be successful but it didn't work.
We live in Ankara, which is not near any water. There isn't sea here That is why he Talha went to Bartın for vocation vacation with 2 his two friends Yusuf and Furkan. The lifeguards warned them, These three boys were warned by lifeguards but they kept on swimming. Talha didn't know how to swim and he panicked. Fortunately Some people at the beach saved the others' lives, but Talha died. the others are saved by peoples in the place but Talha is not alive now.
He Talha worked all the time at several jobs. too much full and part time. He wanted his dreams to come true. The only thing that he wants is he wanted that he didn't have was an Android. but he couldn't have. He was going supposed to go to University [in the United States we usually say "college" instead of university] five days later after he died. He was going to be an engineer like my brother. He was so lovely, generous, and respectful to everyone.
I can hear his parents' screams now from the window and my heart is breaking. Yesterday was his birthday and today he is gone. How can will I handle it? How can I be return to normal? I'm sooo sorry for him.
I don't want to see death anymore. Every day I see our soldiers dying and now it's really hurting...
I am sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful and well-written essay.
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