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Hi. (*˙︶˙*)/
マリベルです。日本語が下手でごめん。 正直にいって、わかりません。私に日本語教えてください。 ありがとう。
For before わかりません。Try adding either the following:
まったく (completely)
*ぜんぜん (don't at all)
*あまり ( don't)
ちょっと (a little)
Or
すこし (a little but more polite than ちょっと)
To sound more like a native speaker.
Like
まったくわかりません = I completely don't understand/ I have no clue at all.
Or
私にちょっと日本語を教えてください= please teach me a littlle bit of Japanese.
I hope this helps. Good luck with studying.
Note * means that they can only be used in the negative form.
あまりわかりません✅
ぜんぜんわかりません✅
あまりわかります
ぜんぜんわかります
0 votedSeptember 13, 20151はじめまして
はじめまして、私はモリイです。私はイギリスじんです。私は18歳です。よろしくおねがいします。
Or
はじめまして。私はモリイです。イギリスじんです。18歳です。よろしくおねがいします。
Why は instead わ?
While the sound is in itself わ、in written Japanese, は is used instead of わ.
The じん part of イギリスじん means person therefore in the context a "England person" or in correct terms, English.
The passage I rewrote excluding the わたしは is more natural. In Japan, once the subject has been stated (in this case モリイ) it is implied that the following information would be in connection to the subject. There is nothing wrong with your text in regards to grammar, however it's a bit unnatural.
I hope these help you. If you need any clarification feel free to message me.
よろしくおねがいします!
0 votedSeptember 11, 20150What I like to do is split the speech into sections.
With yours it would be
Returning
Introduction/name
Work experience
Company before, what, when,why, duration
End of speech and
This helped me with maintaining content and keeping me on track as nerves kick in, especially in a foreign language. Trying to remember word for word can ruin you when you're dealing with uncomfortable situations. So remembering the heart of the each section will help alot.
0 votedSeptember 7, 20150Is it correct,please ?
Is this correct,please ?
(My Dear Alexander supertramp, If I had half your courage, if I could be liberated from all the constraints .. from my meaningless life , I would finally test the real meaning of life away from this Killer community. Peace to your free soul .)Well written! Just a couple of mistakes but it did not displace the essence and purpose of your message.
0 votedSeptember 3, 20153
