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- Practice - 0911 Personal computer: I had my own computer since I was second years in junior high school, but my old brother’s computer always better than mine, and he always built computer by himself, so his PC were all custom-built. And I always use his PC which he didn’t want it, and he gave me his PC were all so far so good, even it was used for a period of time. And the most benefit is very cheap for each computer he built. Note : please point out my mistakes, and tell me why I use wrong word or sentence or grammer, or tell me why the different between my mistakes and your corrections!! Thank you!!September 11, 201501
- My English practice - 0910 Title : I love Katana !! I like Japanese Katana, I like its shape of blade, blade pattern, guard, grip, and I like the black one best. Sometime I’ll watch movie which are about Katana or Samurai, but I don’t like the spirit of Bushido because it always give oppressive feeling. I like to see the ronin or samurai using katana to kill people ( I mean, kill bad guys ^^ ). I request my old brother to use 3D-Max to build a Katana to give me, and it was so beautiful. Hope one day, I’ll buy one the katana which doesn’t edge. Please point out my mistakes, thank you! Chinese version : 我愛武士刀 我喜歡日本武士刀，喜歡它的刀行、刀紋、劍柄、刀握，最愛黑款。 有時候我都在看跟武士刀或武士有關的電影，但是我不喜歡它們的武士精神，給我一種很壓抑的感覺。 我喜歡看浪人或武士用武士刀砍人(我是指，壞人) 我有拜託我哥用3D-MAX幫我做一把刀，它蠻好看的。 希望有一天，我會買一把未開鋒的刀。 ( 這不是中翻英，中文是我寫給外國人士看得如果它們想學的話，這中文是給改英文的人參考的，英文才是我原味的寫作 )謝謝September 9, 201580
随便东西写 => 随便写东西
上次我上这个写中文我说 => 上次我上这个写中文说
当我在日本的时候我很忙 => 当時我在日本的时候我很忙 => 当時我在日本的时候很忙
这是一个Cambridge的教英语的"合格"=> 證書 or 認證
当我做的时候，我也没有时间我不能来这里写中文 (表達不是很清楚，所以我寫一些例句去猜你想表達的)
1. 我在取的認證的過程，也不是沒時間來這寫中文。
2. 當時我在考認證的時候，我也不是沒時間來這。
现在我写很随便的东西 => 我現在都隨意寫了。
这个周末一点无聊 => 這個周末有點無聊
今天我不知道做什么 => 今天我不知道要做什么
电视没有意思的诗篇 => 電視播一些沒意思的詩篇
我不要出去 => 我也不想出去
我想要写我租金认识一个台湾的怒孩子 => 我想要寫一篇我租房的時候，認識一個台灣的"小屁孩""小屁孩"?? (哈我喜歡這樣用，不管他年紀)
当我在伦敦做CELTA我"叫"他英文 => 教
我的课有很多不同的国家。有意大利的人，西班牙的人，日本人，法国人，巴西的人
1. => 有義大利的、西班牙的、日本的、法國的、巴西的
2. => 有義大利人、西班牙人、日本人、法國人、巴西人
3. => 像是說有義大利、西班牙、日本、法國、巴西等等國家
很多方式可以自己組合看看，文中 : 有意大利"的"人 ，那個"的"去掉會比較順
所以我觉得很有意思"较"他们英文 => 教
一个"房间"我很多不同的国家！ => 要不要改成 "教室"
我看到這邊我才知道你表達的 " 做CELTA " 是說你在教英文了，我以為你是在考認證~~ :)
我跟这个台湾的女孩子成为朋友。 => 我跟一位台湾的女孩子成为朋友
我"叫"他英文他教"他"中文 => 教、教、教， 很重要! ~他教我中文~
我非常喜欢他的普通话，因为非常容易听得懂 => 因為很容易就聽懂
很情趣，很容易听到 => What? "情趣" XD 很容易听到?
1. 很有趣，很常聽到 => sounds great? :)
我听说很多外国人喜欢去台湾学习中文 => 我听说很多外国人喜欢去台湾"学"中文
我也想要去，因为我可以一边教英文一边学习中文 => 一边学中文
还只有认识一点汉子 => 且只認識一點漢字
我想要找普通话用的工作 =>我想找中文方面的工作
搜一我需要进步我的写的和看的水平 => 所以我需要提升我的寫作和閱讀
my correcting is used tranditional ,so if you feel hard to read, go to google translate to simple Chinese, hope that will be helpful to you, sorry my broken english.
bye
0 votedSeptember 7, 20150- Misunderstanding!! To XXXXXXX : Sorry, I didn't realize it would cause you any problems, please forgive me. I type the sentences in Skype chat room that they didn’t have tone, and it’s a bit difficult to create some English sentence. I go to a web to find someone to correct my English writhing, but sometimes my some of writings had no helper to correct it, so I’ll give to you my writing to correct, but today, I don’t know you can’t use microphone, and I don’t have any more writing to give to you today, and there only can type English, it’ll limit my talking skill, will cause me give you some mistake talking, and I’m not angry, I want give you some of my question, but my problem are all Chinese+English that I want it all become English sentence, but your cell phone can’t receive Chinese, so I don’t have any question to ask you today. And this is my first time see this situation that I thought it was an online talking, if it is, that will allow me to ask Chinese+English question, but it isn’t, so I said “I don’t know what to do when I wait your reply”, ”and I want you chose another time” , and if I have English question, I can just type they and log out Skype to let you help my sentence and correct it, but like I said, this is my first time see this situation, all I have just Chinese+English question, I didn’t prepare any English question, my question that contain two language, so in this situation I don’t know how to ask you question. After this if you can’t talk in Skype then I’ll just send you English question such as writing, and we happy, not angry, I have to cook lunch, take care. Bye Can Please , point out my mistake of writing, thank you!!September 7, 201520
- I haven’t received your message yet!! Do your skype could store history message? Because I haven’t received your reply for two day, and that will cause me to wait blind. I have some idea : 1. Every time we chose two day in a week for using skype, each day talk one hour ( over one hour, I will not concentrate on our speaking ). 2. If you have something to come up, we can cancel the day which we chose. ( we don’t have to change the day which we cancel ) 3. You can chose the day from your Monday to Thursday, and Sunday, so it’s my day from Monday to Friday, remember that my time is earlier than yours by thirteen hour. 4. I will check my skype message every Sunday morning at twelve p.m., to make sure what day you chose. 5. You can chose the time from your eight p.m. to nine p.m. , it’s better that you chose your time of night. ( I have to cook lunch at eleven a.m. , so we can’t chose ten p.m. in your local time) 6. My friend, don’t be late, I’ll wait at least fifteen minutes, so don’t forget it!! Note : please point out my mistake, or help my sentence to become more fluent, and thank you for your help.September 5, 201500
我想学中文
我还不会说国语
因为我每天都不说 ，每天都不写。 ( i give you some example, chose one which you like it )
1. 是因為我幾乎很少用到中文。
2. 因為我每天 很少用到 中文 ，也不常寫字。
3. 每天要用到中文的機會很少。
4. 日常生活用不太到國語。
NOTE : 其實你 那句 "因为我每天都不说 ，每天都不写" 也OK阿!!
我不上学，所以我不学。 ( i give you some example, chose one which you like it )
1. 我沒去上中文課，所以我才沒在學中文。
2. 我沒去中文學校上課，所以我自己沒在學。
我想学。我觉得如果我在这里写，我可以练习和以后我会说国语。你觉不觉得？我可以练习和以后我会说国语 = >
1. 我練習後可就可以說中文了嗎?
2. 我可以在這練習後就能說國語。
你觉不觉得？ =>
1.你覺得呢?
it's a good chose to learn Chinese in here , good luck!
0 votedSeptember 4, 20150- some sentence of question Today I want to practice some sentence of question, plz point out my mistake, thank you!!! 1. What is brand of your watch? My watch’s brand is Rolex. 2. What is your job in this hospital? My job is security guard. 3. What is your major in college? I major in electronic engineering. 4. Who is your girlfriend between the three guys that in front of us? The middle one. 5. Who is the best teammate of them you think? Everyone. 6. Who is the king of the iron throne in the end of “Game of Throne”? This novel is not finished yet. 7. Where were you parked your car? That one in the left corner. 8. Where were you going after the dinner party yesterday? My mother had something urgent to me. 9. Where my guitar? You ask me, I ask whom? 10. Which country had you been before? I haven’t been yet. 11. Which color of PS4 you like the best? The white one. 111111 12. Which breed of dog you like? Labrador. 13. When you bought this computer? in July fourteen this year. 14. When did you call me on cell phone? About two hour before. 15. When you broken up with your ex-girlfriend? I don’t want to mention that. 16. How did you finish the book that has over five hundreds pages in just one day? Keep concentrating. 17. How did you and your girlfriend acquainted with each other before? I was initiative to pursue her. 18. How could you do that without conscience? As long as the world can be changed, I will do that, whatever it takes. Note : I have a question, “pleasure doing business” , pleasure => V. doing => N. business N. why can this three world become a sentence? Thank you.September 4, 201500
