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Hi what is your name? My name is Egor. I'm a boy with short dark hair. I have big green eyes with a pale complexion. I like meeting new people and I'm friendly and always kind and calm. I'm like playing basketball and UFC fighting. In my free time I'm going I go to the cinema and walk with friends.

Very good! Not many mistakes, and I could understand everything. Good job on your first post!

The importance of the music

There is a famous contemporary piece that is called Silence for " 4'33". It was released by John Cage in the 60s, probably. It is only silence for 4 minutes and 33 seconds.
The provocative artpiece triggered an interesting and bright debate about what was art and about the reason why a vynil not playing anything could considered an artwork.
I think it was a very genial idea realized by an eccentric and clever musician who already had invented the modified piano and other weird ways to create music on their own, for example, putting some radio on different channels at different distances and heights.
Moreover there is another reading about the work of John Cage. Try to listen to it and then tell me if you don't need to listen to the music. Any kind of music.

Aloneness or sociability

What do you prefer to do in your spare time ? What makes you happy and satisfied - to be solitary and isolated from people at home (for some time) in order to relax, just deep<strike>en</strike> in your thoughts, recall<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> some pleasant memories in your head and try to assess your lifestyle or<font style="background-color: yellow;"> are you</font> one of those people who prefer to spend their free time in a cafe or at <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> noisy party, hanging out with some close friends and acquaintances, just chatting and having fun? Which type of person you are?

Well written paragraph! I would say that I'm half and half. I like spending one day alone at home, but the next day I have to go out and doing something social or I start to feel restless, but if I spend too much time with people then I start to feel tired and crabby. It's a balancing act for me.

The only part of your paragraph that needs revising is the title. Those words aren't the ones you are looking for even though they kind of make sense, they're just a little awkward. I'd try something like:

Introverted or Extroverted {these are the characteristics you are describing so I think this would be your best choice of words}

Do you prefer being alone or being social?

Essay

Many countries are experiencing serious problems with the environment,with pollution of their land , water and air.what are these problems and how might they be reduced?
Nowadays most of the countries face lots of problems with their environment , which is affecting the land, water, and air . I think many problems of pollution are caused by developing countries are becoming industrialized , destruction of trees , which leads to increasing pollution and pressure on natural resources , this essay will examine some of these problems in detail , and propose some solutions.
One of the biggest problems on land is the impact of humans on the environment .
In recent decades , destroying wild life habitats have increased and most species of animals are endangered . Perhaps the most helpful thing we can do to tackle these difficulties is to try persuade government to preserve natural areas and wild animals . So that we can protect these natural areas and prevent of extinction of endangered animals.
An other factor which has significant impact on air pollution is factories and vehicles that produce emissions and exhaust fumes . In most of the countries the number of the cars on their streets is growing and cheep air travel is allowing more people to fly and as consequences large amounts of toxic gasses are entering into the atmosphere which causes harmful climate change and destruction of the protective ozone layer. I believe that best way to reduce these problems is for the government to should introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and impose green taxes on drivers and air line companies.
Finally another problem is pollution of water .That is to say most of the factories release harmful chemicals into the rivers and the melting of the ice caps because of global warming , which leads rise of sea level and causes od flooding ,to solve these problems government campaigns should promote recycling and individuals should also try to be greener.

To sum up ,government should start tackling these issues , and dealing with these problems to ensure a healthy future.

The last day in the holiday

Today is the last day of my in the holiday in Egypt
so i must prepare for school tomorrow and i am annoyed by that because i hate every moment i spend in the school
i love spending my day at home more than going to to school
the classes are very boring and i hate staying at the wooden desk
so i hope that the school gets burned down tomorrow

Haha very charming note entry :) I hope school gets a bit more interesting for you!