Essay
Many countries are esperiencing serious problems with the environmet,with pollution of their land , water and air.what are these problems and how might they be reduced?
Nowadays most of the contries face lots of problems with their environment , which affecting on land , water , air . I think main problems of pollution cussed by developing countries are becoming industrialsed , destruction of trees , which leads increasing pollution and pressure on natural resorces , this essay will examine some of these problems in detail , and propose some solutions.
One of the biggest problems on land is impact of humans on the environment .
In recent decades , destroying wild life habitats are increased and most species of animals are endangered . Perhaps most helpful thing we can do to takle these defficalties is to try persuade government to pereserve natural areas and wild animals . So that we can protect of natural areas and prevent of extinction of endangered animals.
An other factor which has significant impact on air pollution is factories and vahicles that produce emissions and ehaust fumes . In most of the countries the number of the cars on their streets is growing and cheep air travel is allowing more people to fly and as consequences large amounts of tocic gasses into the atmosphere which leads harmful climate change and destruction of the protectiv azone layer. I belive that best way to reduce these problems , government should introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and impose green taxes on drivers and air line conpanies.
Finally another problem is pollution of water .That is to say most of the factories release harmful chemicals into the rivers and the melting of the ice caps because of global warming , which leads rise of sea level and cusses od flooding ,to solve these problems government campaigns should promote recycling and individuals should also try to be greener.
To sum up ,government should start tackl these issues , and dealing eith these problems to ensure healthy future.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 9
1
Essay
Many countries are experiencing serious problems with the environment,with pollution of their land , water and air.what are these problems and how might they be reduced?Nowadays most of the countries face lots of problems with their environment , which is affecting the land, water, and air . I think many problems of pollution are caused by developing countries are becoming industrialized , destruction of trees , which leads to increasing pollution and pressure on natural resources , this essay will examine some of these problems in detail , and propose some solutions.
One of the biggest problems on land is the impact of humans on the environment .
In recent decades , destroying wild life habitats have increased and most species of animals are endangered . Perhaps the most helpful thing we can do to tackle these difficulties is to try persuade government to preserve natural areas and wild animals . So that we can protect these natural areas and prevent of extinction of endangered animals.
An other factor which has significant impact on air pollution is factories and vehicles that produce emissions and exhaust fumes . In most of the countries the number of the cars on their streets is growing and cheep air travel is allowing more people to fly and as consequences large amounts of toxic gasses are entering into the atmosphere which causes harmful climate change and destruction of the protective ozone layer. I believe that best way to reduce these problems is for the government to should introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and impose green taxes on drivers and air line companies.
Finally another problem is pollution of water .That is to say most of the factories release harmful chemicals into the rivers and the melting of the ice caps because of global warming , which leads rise of sea level and causes od flooding ,to solve these problems government campaigns should promote recycling and individuals should also try to be greener.
To sum up ,government should start tackling these issues , and dealing with these problems to ensure a healthy future.
0
Essay
Many countries are experiencing serious problems with the environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?
Nowadays most countries face lots of problems with their environment, which affecting on land, water and air. I think the main problems of pollution are caused by developing countries are becoming industrialised and the destruction of trees, which leads to increasing pollution and pressure on natural resources, this essay will examine some of these problems in detail , and propose some solutions.
One of the biggest problems on land is the impact of humans on the environment. In recent decades, destroying wildlife habitats has increased and most species of animals are endangered. Perhaps the most helpful thing we can do to tackle these difficulties is to try to persuade governments to preserve natural areas and wild animals. So that we can protect natural areas and prevent the extinction of endangered animals.
Another factor which has a significant impact on air pollution is factories and vehicles that produce emissions and exhaust fumes. In most of the countries the number of the cars on their streets is growing and cheap air travel is allowing more people to fly and as a consequence large amounts of toxic gases are released into the atmosphere which leads to harmful climate change and destruction of the protective ozone layer. I believe that the best way to reduce these problems is for the government to introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies.
Finally another problem is water pollution.That is to say most of the factories release harmful chemicals into the rivers and the melting of the ice caps because of global warming, lead to a rise in the sea level and causes flooding. To solve these problems government campaigns should promote recycling and individuals should also try to be greener.
To sum up, governments should start tackling these issues , and dealing with these problems to ensure a healthy future for our planet.
Hello Ghazal,
I think you have made a good try at this one, there is a logical layout with an introduction, 3 supporting examples and a summary. This time I have colour coded the mistakes. Blue is for spelling mistakes and there are quite a lot of these including some simpler words. You will be punished for this in an exam.
0
Essay (Part 1)
Many countries are (esperiencing) experiencing serious problems with the (environmet) environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?Nowadays, most
One of the biggest problems on
In recent decades , destroying wildlife habitats
0
Essay (Part2)
Another factor which has a significant impact on air pollution is are factories and (vahicles) vehicles that produce emissions and (ehaust) exhaust fumes. In most of the countries the number of the cars on their streets is growing and (cheep) cheap air travel is allowing more people to fly. As a consequence, large amounts of (tocic) toxic (gasses) gases are released into the atmosphere which leads to harmful climate change and destruction of the protective (azone) ozone layer. I (belive) believe that best way to reduce these problems is to petition the government should to introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies.
Finally, another problem is pollution of water.That is to say Most of the factories release harmful chemicals into the rivers. In addition, the melting of the ice caps is causing global warming, which leads to a rise of sea level and (cusses) global flooding. To solve these problems government campaigns should promote recycling, and individuals should also try to be greener.
To sum up, governments should start (tackl) tackling these issues and dealing (eith) with these problems to ensure a healthy future for our planet.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
