An exciting film    

        Recently, I watched an animated movie named Kung Fu Panda, which was produced by an American studio in 2008. It is full of Chinese cultural elements, such as scenery, background, clothes, food etc.
        The film mainly describes a panda named Pol who has a kung fu dream, but he has to work in a noodle restaurant with his adoptive father. He does not reveal his love for kung fu until the day a kung fu master chooses the dragon warrior. After much difficulty he gets to the place to see who the dragon warrior is. To everyone’s surprise he is determined as dragon warrior. It really is like a dream.
       At first, his teacher master Shifu does not think Pol is the real dragon warrior because of Pol’s fat body and clumsiness, he refuses to teach Pol. Before the enemy comes, Shifu is deeply touched by Pol’s spirit of never giving up. Finally, Pol becomes a real dragon warrior with kung fu and he wins the war against the enemy in the end.
      In this movie, there is so much humorous dialogue and action that you can’t stand laughing. More importantly, the voices of all the actors are very pure and standard American English making it worth watching for learners of English. This is an excellent film, that is the reason why I like it very much.

不错！这里有很多高级的说法。

Wine tasting

Today I'll attend a wine tasting event  that I went to last year and enjoyed a lot.          last year I was there and enjoyed it a lot.
I hope this year will be the same or even better.

I ask nicely for corrections    Would anyone be kind enough to help me correct my writing?

It is a notice to my friend:

Hello Tom,

Yesterday I was drinking coffee in front of the laptop you lent me the other day. I had put the glass aside, but then, when I was trying to reach my notebook, I accidentally caught my hand on it and spilt it all over the laptop.

I am terribly sorry. I promise I will pay you back for the computer. I am also sorry about not having told you that earlier, but I tried to repair the laptop  first, but they said it was completely saturated and thus unfixable.

Let me know if that's alright.

>>>> You borrow FROM someone or lend TO them

>>>> flood is for a bigger space. A house, a field, a room can be flooded, but if too much liquid has gone into an item then it is saturated

I need corrections:

Notice:

"Fight the swear words and slang"

We invite you to take part in the workshop that will take place in our school hall. The workshop will be about benefits of speaking pure and unadulterated language. If you come, you will learn how to produce clear utterances and simultaneously treat others with respect. You will also find out how to abstain from pejorative expressions and swearing like a trooper. We warmly encourage you to pop down. (slang word for "come round"???)!  > 'pop down' doesn't need ' ' here. Also, it is very informal and doesn't fit with the rest of the text which is very high level (well done, by the way!) I wouldn't say that it is 'slang' (street language) as it is too normal and rather quaint. I also don't think that this would appear in American English.
See you around  >>you wouldn't finish this notice with this line as it is suddenly too informal, try something like 'we look forward to you joining us'

Finally, I have become a travel writer.

As I have written before, I wanted to be a writer. Finally, I became one yesterday! My first article was about Tinian island.

Tinian island is located in the Pacific Ocean and it has a sad history. If you can read Japanese, please visit my article.


https://itta.me/article/11155/

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Congratulations!

Have a look at the present perfect. Use it when something in the past is affecting something in the present.

'I became a travel writer' = it happened a long time ago, nothing to do with the main idea of what you are saying now.

'I have become a travel writer'= it happened in the past but is important NOW because the story I am telling is carrying on from the past.