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"Fight the swear words and slang"
We invite you to take part in the workshop that will take place in our school hall. The workshop will be about benefits of speaking pure and unadulterated language. If you come, you will learn how to produce clear utterances and simultaneously treat others with respect. You will also find out how to abstain from pejorative expressions and swearing like a trooper. We warmly encourage you to "pop down" (slang word for "come round"???)!
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Notice:"Fight the swear words and slang"
We invite you to take part in the workshop that will take place in our school hall. The workshop will be about benefits of speaking pure and unadulterated language. If you come, you will learn how to produce clear utterances and simultaneously treat others with respect. You will also find out how to abstain from pejorative expressions and swearing like a trooper. We warmly encourage you to pop down. (slang word for "come round"???)! > 'pop down' doesn't need ' ' here. Also, it is very informal and doesn't fit with the rest of the text which is very high level (well done, by the way!) I wouldn't say that it is 'slang' (street language) as it is too normal and rather quaint. I also don't think that this would appear in American English.
See you around >>you wouldn't finish this notice with this line as it is suddenly too informal, try something like 'we look forward to you joining us'
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