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Hi! my name is Sara and I´m from Spain. I finished my degree as teacher of primary school one year ago and currently I´m trying to improve my english.
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    New essay! Hello! I'm trying to improve my writing skills and get a formal use of English in my essays. I,ve written a new one, if someone could check it and transform it into a formal essay would be great. MODERN TECHNOLOGY IS CHANGING OUR WORLD. THIS HAS ADVANTAGES SUCH AS BRINGING PEOPLE TOGETHER THROUGH COMMUNICATION. IT ALSO HAS DISADVANTAGES SUCH AS DESTROYING THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN CULTURES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? Everyone know, that technology, in particular the Internet, has changed the way we used to live. Nowadays, we are living in a digital revolution where modern technology is everywhere. It affects the ways in which we work with and we interact with other members of the society. This essay will discuss some of the benefits that technology, in this case Internet, has brought to our world, and then I will look briefly at the disadvantages. If we look backwards, we can see some improvements that Internet has brought to our lives. Firstly, the major benefit that we can find is unlimited communication. Everyone who live abroad can speak face to face with someone via Skype or any social media. In addition, there are multiples websites where you can share your opinions, ideas and thoughts with other people around the globe. Secondly, there is abundant information and resources, for instance, it is now common for people to seek advices on all sort of issues, but you must be cautios, because not everything you read could it be true. Another key point is the entertainment that Internet offers. This is the major reason why people enjoy surfing the Internet. There are plenty of webs where you can watch movies, download music or read your favourite books. The last point is the online services and e-commerce, which make easier for some companies to transfer funds to every part of the world. Nonetheless, there are few disadvantages as well. One negative point is that Internet can cause addition. This big issue affects people social interactions and sometimes incrementing problems with member of the family. Equally important are healthy problems due to spend much time at the PC, such as obesity. To sum up, I am in complete agreement that modern technology has brought to our lives more benefits than disadvantages. Now is easier keep closer to someone you love, no matter how far you are from them. THANK YOU FOR READING MY BORING ESSAY!!
    April 14, 2016
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    IELTS EXAM. TASK 2 Hi everyone! I'm still studying these f*?!'-# exam and I need help with my writings. Thanks to those who had ckecked my previous writings. Thisone is about academics subjects. IS THERE ANY VALUE IN STUDYING ACADEMIC SUBJECTS THAT ARE NOT 'USEFUL' IN TERMS OF GENERATING WEALTH FOR THE COUNTRY? As everyone know, when students begin their ways in University, sometimes can be difficult and stressful to choose the correct career. In fact, this election can be related to parents opinions or even more important, if exists jobs opportunities for thisone. The next essay will discuss the importance of studying anything that you wish without looking for their profesional openings. Firstly, there are many academic subjects that can be useful in terms of contributing to people's quality of life . One of them, for instance, is studying something in relation with Education. Many professionals claim that this field in particular is not well paid. Teachers spend extra-houres in school and at home working for their students. However, from my experience working as teacher and see how pregressively students are improving, makes your self-steem bigger. In addition, 'curiosity' it is a significant human trait. With this in mind, there are some academic subjects which allow people to satisfy this need. Astronomy is one of them, it permits people to understand the behave of planets and stars. On the other hand, Archaeology show us how people lived in the past and some artifacts that they used to live. In short, there is little evendence that simply educating people to be effective workers, make them happier or richer. Therefore, we do not must discredit any academic subject, because all of them have differents and interesting functions.
    February 25, 2016
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    IELTS Writing TASK 1. FORMAL LETTER Hello again! This time I have done another writing from the IELTS test. It would be great if someone could check it again for me! thanks!! YOU LIVE IN A ROO IN COLLEGE WHICH YOU SHARE WITH ANOTHER STUDENT. HOWEVER, THERE ARE MANY PROBLEMS WITH ARRANGEMENT AND YOU FIND IT VERY DIFFICULT TO WORK. WRITE A LETTER TO THE ACCOMMODATION OFFICER AT THE COLLEGE. IN THE LETTER: -DESCRIBE THE SITUATION -EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEMS AND WHY IT IS DIFFICULT TO WORK -SAY WHAT KIND OF ACCOMMODATION YOU WOULD PREFER. Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter with reference to some issues that I have been having recently, in particular at night in your lodge, As you may already be aware of, I am currently enrolled in a Spanish course and working part-time in a private language school. I teach General English and Business English. Under those circumstances, I only have time to study at night. On the other hand, I am sharing this accommodation with another student, The main problem is that my mate is attending a dramatic arts course, therefore, he needs to speak louder when he is practicing. This would not have been a problem for me if I was not in the middle of my exams. Thus, I would like to ask you for another accommodation in this college. It would be great if I could stay by my- self in this period of time. I highly need to pass these exams if I want to get the grant. I hope you my request will take a consideration. Your Faithfully
    August 28, 2015
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    IELTS Writing TASK 2. Fashionable clothes Hi everyone! I´m trying to improve my writing skills, so I have written this essay from the IELTS test to practice. If someone could check it I would be really grateful! MANY PEOPLE LIKE TO WEAR FASHIONABLE CLOTHES. WHY DO YOU THINK THIS IS THE CASE? IS THIS A GOOD THING OR A BAD THING? Nowadays, more and more people are spending their incomes in clothes, and if something it is for sure is that clothes' world is a big business. In addition, markets and malls are getting clothes more suitable for people every day. I would like to say, that I support both opinions. On one hand, I think it is a good thing because everyone has multiples hobbies such as play extreme sports or just gardening. Nonetheless, one of this hobbies could it be to buy new clothes and be in fashion. In fact, as I said before, clothes' world is a massive business. I do not have the data I would need to be confident on this matter, but I believe this particular world makes enlarge economy gradually every year. Another key point is the importance of the appearance in the society. Every citizen that wants to get a job, must show a good image of themselves. This feature helps to show to society that you are the right person to get that position. On the other hand, I believe people should expend their proceeds in other important things, for instance: Education. At the present time, there are several issues in our country regarding to Education that I think we need to solve first instead of invest too much money in clothes. From my experience, I would like to add that one of my relatives likes spending much money in fashionable clothes, as a consequence sometimes she has not enough money to spend in other kind of things. Let me conclude by saying that if people keep investing money like that, consumerism will increase more and more each day.
    August 22, 2015
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    August 21, 2015
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    Hi! I'm not pretty sure about that, but in my opinion the best way to improve this is listening to international radios or watching English movies with English subtitles. Also, try to translate English songs that you like. Hope you find this helpful!
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    August 20, 2015
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    IELTS Test

    Hi everyone!
    I have to pass my IELTS exam with good marks and I have many problems with my writing.
    I few days I'll write my first essay here, If someone could check me would be great!
    Thanks in advance!

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    August 20, 2015
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    IELTS TEST Hi everyone! I have to pass my IELTS exam with good marks and I have many problems with my writings. I few days I'll write my first essay here, If someone could check me would be great! Thanks in advanced!
    August 20, 2015
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