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- 当建筑师 － HSK practice #1 大家好， 谢谢你门帮助我检查我的语法。：） 秀英 有一个梦想。她要设计一个建筑。 她是一名飞行员， 但她想换工作。 当她驾驶飞机时, 喜欢看都市风景。 秀英的心里直羡慕建筑师，也会赞美他们。 她会练习画草图, 在她的笔记本里每一页上都 是建筑物的图纸。 有一天她料理家务突然感到疲劳。 秀英认为噶冒了。 她马上上床 睡觉。一觉醒来还觉得很累。 秀英上网查找什么食物有营养可以帮助她， 去超市买橘子。 过天秀英终于决定去看医生。 医生诊断她心脏衰弱。 他说“我很同情你， 但很可能你很快会去世。” 秀英惊恐失色，刚刚以为身体非常健看。 但秀英还想设计以座大楼，不会容易放弃。她算一算怎么可以现实梦想。碰巧听说有一场架构设计的比赛会开放，她 决定会竞争。为了创造一个厉害的设计， 秀英问过专家建议。 她经过大量的努力， 终于交设计。一会儿秀英比赛中取胜了。听到那消息，她自重的 套上外衣， 去看美丽的都市风景。 虽然没有办法知道未来会怎样， 但是她想继续做这样热情的工作。March 26, 201941
Having a conversation with a local.
While I was working at a food court, a guy who sitting on a the seat in front of me talked to me. He said he saw me doing my workout at a gym in this morning. It seemed that he also used the same gym as mine me. We talked about our countries, getting a green card, and so on. I have been often surprised that people in Hawaii talk to others very casually, whereas in Japanese people rarely do it. Since I am foreigner in Hawaii, I tend to be vigilant guarded. But we had a good conversation today.Its nice to hear that you are making friends in Hawaii! Good job on the entry, keep it up!
0 votedMarch 19, 20190The Tale of Peter Rabbit
I am going to tell you the story of a little rabbit. His name was Peter; he had three brothers Flopsy, Mopsy and Cotton-tail. They lived with their mother underneath the roots of a big old tree.
One day the mother had to go out, so she said to the little rabbits that they couldn’t not to go too far of past the tree where they lived; and above all, no matter what they did, they couldn’t go to Mr. McGregor’s garden. After that the Mrs. Rabbit took her hamper (suggestion: basket) and her umbrella to leave and left their home.Flopsy, Mopsy and Cotton-tail were good so they went to gather blackberries, however the forth brother wasn’t too as good (suggestion: well-behaved) , with his blue jacket and white shoes he left his brothers to go to Mr. McGregor’s garden. Peter was naughty and curious, once he reached the garden he snuck underneath beneath the front door and saw an old man harvesting all kinds of vegetables.
The little rabbit hide and ate everything he could, when Mr. McGregor noticed he was there the old man ran as fast as he could to scare away the intruder. After a little fight Peter could escaped but not without losing his favorite shoes. The little rabbit tried to get out of there but the farmer was decided determined to catch him.
When Mr. McGregor saw Peter again he ran to get chased after him but Peter climbed (suggestion: scrambled) up the garden’s fence to get free though and our little friend lost his new jacket. When he finally got (suggestion: returned) home his mother was speechless. because Peter was exhausted and she couldn`t find understand why, so his mother gave him chamomile tea and put him in bed to rest hoping for his best.Good job!! :)
0 votedMarch 19, 20191restructured & refined --College Students better should choose a relatively broad range of subjects
I believe it's better that college students choose a relatively broad range of subjects. It is true that this will cost (require) some depth of understanding and competence on a few subjects. But the benefit will make up for the cost. It exposes students to ways of thinking and problem solving used in different fields. Students will be more creative and will be more at ease when they need to work with experts from various fields. So I prefer (Suggestion: advocate for) a relatively broad range.Great job!!! :)
0 votedMarch 18, 20193The sentences.
1. January 2014. In On the freedom square on for the third month of the year people get together and make making various requirements (This doesn't make sense here, consider using demands). Some people demand the government's resignation, the others require the a orientation (can use: reemphasis, prioritization) on European values, and the rest, as has been (said or reiterated) spoken in t throughout the 20th-30th years of the 20th century in Russia - want there to be more to sympathize (empathy or compassion) the with one and the another.Suggested sentence:
On January 2014 people gathered in Freedom Square to criticize the government. Some people demanded the government's resignation; others wanted there to be a reemphasis on European values and the rest, as has been reiterated throughout the 20th century, wants society to be more compassionate with one another.
0 votedMarch 18, 201912. I made a remark, but he only snapped in reply.
3. Instead of being offended he smiled and didn't react to their stupidity. (Good!)4. He borrowed a small amount from the bank to start his own business.
5. they deceived us and didn't return our money. (Good!)
6. Pour the oil on a hot frying pan and leave it in that state for a few minutes.0 votedMarch 18, 20191Message
Hi Peter!
I’m happy you wrote me. My father is in the kitchen. He likes to cook Brazilian dishes. Tonight he is cooking dinner. My mother is in the dining room. She is reading many books. As you know, she is a teacher, so she is planning her next lessons. My older brother is in the garage. He is cleaning our car. My older sister is in the living room. She is doing exercises. She likes to be in shape. I’m too lazy to do for doing exercises! My younger brother is in his bedroom. He is listening to rock music. I’m in my bedroom. I’m doing my homework and also watching the movie you recommended to me. I know you don’t believe I can do two things at the same time but I can! I will tell you every detail of the movie.
What are you doing?0 votedMarch 18, 20191
