The sentences.
1. January 2014. On the freedom square for the third month people get together and making various requirements. Some people demand the government resignation, the other require the orientation on European values, and the rest, as spoken in the 20th-30th years of the 20th century in Russia - to sympathize the one and the other.
2. I made some remarks for him, but he only snapped in reply.
3. Instead of being offended he smiled and didn't react to their stupidity.
4. He borrowed a small amount in the bank to start his own business.
5. they deceived us and didn't return our money.
6. Pour the oil on a hot frying pan and hold it in such state for a few minutes.
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The sentences.
1. January 2014. In On the freedom square on for the third month of the year people get together and make making various requirements (This doesn't make sense here, consider using demands). Some people demand the government's resignation, the others require the a orientation (can use: reemphasis, prioritization) on European values, and the rest, as has been (said or reiterated) spoken in t throughout the 20th-30th years of the 20th century in Russia - want there to be more to sympathize (empathy or compassion) the with one and the another.Suggested sentence:
On January 2014 people gathered in Freedom Square to criticize the government. Some people demanded the government's resignation; others wanted there to be a reemphasis on European values and the rest, as has been reiterated throughout the 20th century, wants society to be more compassionate with one another.
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2. I made a remark, but he only snapped in reply.
3. Instead of being offended he smiled and didn't react to their stupidity. (Good!)
4. He borrowed a small amount from the bank to start his own business.
5. they deceived us and didn't return our money. (Good!)
6. Pour the oil on a hot frying pan and leave it in that state for a few minutes.
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