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Aug 2, 2015
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  • Corrected

    Please correct these sentences

    1. Ann didn't punished her daughter, because she got daughter's confession and apologizes about her actions.

    <em>Ann didn't punish her daughter because she confessed and apologized for her actions.</em>

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    </em>

    2. A wizard lured a princess with help his incantation. 

    <em> No correction necessary</em>

     

    3. A ship carried a heavy cargo, then it impact with another ship, so there remained just soaked wrecks.

    <em>A ship carrying heavy cargo collided with another ship. The impact was so great that all that remained were the soaked wreckage.</em>

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    </em>

    4. Rumors about their wedding were spread by people very quickly. 

    <em> No correction necessary</em>

     

    5. It was fiction that there was real chaos, when wasp flew into the room.

    <em> It was fiction (untrue/a lie) that things were chaotic when the wasp flew into the room.</em>


    6. Her deeds deserve a good spanking. - no, I never punish my children.

    <em> "Her deeds deserve a good spanking."</em>

    <em> "-no, I never punish my children."</em>

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    7. I don't want cooperate with them, because they have rigid time-table.

    <em>I don't want to cooperate with them because they have rigid time-tables.</em>

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    8. I can't trust him, because the all his narratives are fictions.

    <em>I can't trust him because all of his narratives are fictions.</em>

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    </em>

    9. Are you modest? - No, I am shy and coy, because I have a low self-esteem.

    <em>"Are you modest?"</em>

    "No, I am shy and coy because I have low self esteem"


    10. Ann and Tom are happy newlyweds, not merely because guests gave them expensive nuptial gifts, but also because they have waited its event so long.

    <em>Ann and Tom are happy newlyweds, not merely because guests gave them expensive nuptial gifts, but also because they have waited for this event for so long.</em>

     

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    July 26, 2015
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  • Corrected

    Would you like correct this for me, please?

    Hi Victoria,
    How are you? I guess everything is ok.

    I'm writing to you to explain something about my province in case you decided to come to Badajoz. I'll start to talk OR (start by talking about) about some festivals, food and things like that. In my province we have good food like vegetables, fruits and delicious jam. It is very popular, in fact, every year there is a ham fair in Jerez de los Caballeros. If you came, you could see and taste all kind of jam, and also you could observe the way to cut the ham. Moreover OR (Also) in Zafra, we have an International Livestock fair, where (there) are several animals (from different countries) around the world, (such as) deer, bulls, cows. This fair is opened OR (hosted) by the King of Spain.


    In addition, every summer (the fair is held), there is a wonderful International classical Roman threatre,  areal spectacle for your eyes. I remember I used to go with my family there, and I still go (even now).

     

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    July 26, 2015
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  • Corrected
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    July 26, 2015
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  • Corrected

    Note 1

    For the people of the country, or half of the residents (users/visitors) of the site - the bots. I am writing to people and (I'm) already tired. All are silent and they ignore (me). While being welcomed, they wrote that they were happy to see/meet (me). Then (they said) I need to buy the currency? Do not judge, (I) wrote a dictionary. And I apologize for my English. I am ashamed.

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    July 26, 2015
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