I NEED YOUR HELP
Hello, everyone, I'm goinng to attend an English interview about two weeks later, and i prepare this short self-introduction( or call it self-recommendation) lettre, can anyone help me to correct the logical/ grammatical errors there? The interview means a lot to me, thanks for your help so much.
Dear Sir/Madame,
It is <strike>really</strike> a great honor to introduce myself to you. <strike>My name is</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">I am </font>Leng Hanxiao, <strike>come from</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">a Marketing major from</font> Xi'an International Studies University<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <strike>majoring in Marketing</strike>. Because of <strike>the</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">my</font> enthusiasm for <strike>the</strike> new knowledge, <font style="background-color: yellow;">I went to college and have been working hard to improve myself to be better.</font> <strike>I went to the college 3years ago, since then, I have been working hard and try my best to grasp every chance to improve myself to make me better and stronger, not just in the class, but in the life.</strike>
I’m <font style="background-color: yellow;">an </font>open-minded <font style="background-color: yellow;">person </font>and a bookworm<font style="background-color: yellow;">. I have a huge interest</font><strike> interesting</strike> in English<strike> culture and</strike> literature, <font style="background-color: yellow;">especially</font><strike> among which</strike> Britain literature<strike> the most</strike>.<strike> And out of this reason</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Because of this</font>, I chose English as my <strike>double</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">second </font>major<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <strike>and</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> I</font> insisted on studying English courses on weekends for the past three years, during which I studied Advanced English, Chinese English Translation, Survey of British History and Culture, Comprehensive English, Basic English Composition and so on.
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Although I have studied many basic English courses, I think at present, I can only read in a superficial level, but not be competent to think deeply and professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me.
The major that I hope pursue for my further education is Britain literature. I plan to concentrate on study and research in this field in my graduate time. I hope I can form a systematic view of Britain Literature and make a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here.
Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new start point. Thank you!
