I NEED YOUR HELP
Hello, everyone, I'm goinng to attend an English interview about two weeks later, and i prepare this short self-introduction( or call it self-recommendation) lettre, can anyone help me to correct the logical/ grammatical errors there? The interview means a lot to me, thanks for your help so much.
Dear Sir/Madame,
It is really a great honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Leng Hanxiao, come from Xi'an International Studies University, majoring in Marketing. Because of the enthusiasm for the new knowledge, I went to the college 3years ago, since then, I have been working hard and try my best to grasp every chance to improve myself to make me better and stronger, not just in the class, but in the life.
I’m open-minded and a bookworm, interesting in English culture and literature, among which Britain literature the most. And out of this reason, I chose English as my double major and insisted on studying English courses on weekends for the past three years, during which I studied Advanced English, Chinese English Translation, Survey of British History and Culture, Comprehensive English, Basic English Composition and so on.
Although I have studied many basic English courses, I think at present, I can only read in a superficial level, but not be competent to think deeply and professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me.
The major that I hope pursue for my further education is Britain literature. I plan to concentrate on study and research in this field in my graduate time. I hope I can form a systematic view of Britain Literature and make a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here.
Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new start point. Thank you!
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I NEED YOUR HELP
Hello, everyone, I'm goinng to attend an English interview about two weeks later, and i prepare this short self-introduction( or call it self-recommendation) lettre, can anyone help me to correct the logical/ grammatical errors there? The interview means a lot to me, thanks for your help so much.Dear Sir/Madame,
It is
I’m an open-minded person and a bookworm. I have a huge interest
----(I'll get back on this later! :) )
Although I have studied many basic English courses, I think at present, I can only read in a superficial level, but not be competent to think deeply and professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me.
The major that I hope pursue for my further education is Britain literature. I plan to concentrate on study and research in this field in my graduate time. I hope I can form a systematic view of Britain Literature and make a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here.
Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new start point. Thank you!
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I NEED YOUR HELP
Hello, everyone, I'm goinng to attend an English interview about two weeks later, and i prepare this short self-introduction( or call it self-recommendation) lettre, can anyone help me to correct the logical/ grammatical errors there? The interview means a lot to me, thanks for your help so much.Dear Sir/Madame,
It is really a great honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Leng Hanxiao, and I come from the Xi'an International Studies University, with a major in Marketing. Because of my enthusiasm for the new knowledge, I went to the college three years ago. Since then, I have been working hard and trying my best to grasp every chance to improve and make myself better and stronger, not just in the class, but in the life as well.
Although some might say that I am a bookworm, I’m open-minded and keenly interested in the English language. British culture and literature are two of my favorite areas of study. For this reason, I chose English as my double major and insisted on taking English courses on weekends for the past three years. During this time I have studied Advanced English, Chinese English Translation, Survey of British History and Culture, Comprehensive English, Basic English Composition and so on.
Although I have completed many basic English courses, I think at present, I can only read on a superficial level. I believe that further study is necessary in order for me to acquire the competence to think critically and to communication professionally
I hope to further my education by pursuing an advanced degree in Britain literature over the next three years. Through diligent study and a esearch in the field, I hope to form a systematic view of British Literature and establish a solid foundation upon which a future profession may be built.
Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new start point. Thank you! (I don't think you need this last sentence - it seems a bit negative, suggesting that you may not believe in the strength of your own qualifications. That isn't really a message you want to send when applying for a spot in a competitive university.
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嗯 好的 我会考虑删掉 谢谢啦
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除了语句错误，最后两段请务必修改或删掉。所有面试官都不希望看到面试者传达出不自信等负面信息。
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I NEED YOUR HELP
Hello, everyone, I'm going to attend an English interview about two weeks from now, and I have to prepare a short self-introduction( or call it self-recommendation) letter, can anyone help me to correct the logical/grammatical errors here? The interview means a lot to me, thanks for your help so much.Dear Sir/Madame,
It is really a great honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Leng Hanxiao, I come from Xi'an International Studies University, majoring in Marketing. Because of my enthusiasm for new knowledge, I went to the college 3 years ago, since then, I have been working hard and try my best to grasp every chance to improve myself; to make me better and stronger, not just in the class, but in the life.
I’m open-minded and a bookworm, interested in English culture and literature, among which British literature the most. And out of this reason, I chose English as my double major and insisted on studying English courses on weekends for the past three years, during which I studied Advanced English, Chinese English Translation, Survey of British History and Culture, Comprehensive English, Basic English Composition and so on.
Although I have studied many basic English courses, I think at present, I can only read in a superficial level, but not be competent to think deeply and professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me.
The major that I hope pursue for my further education is British literature. I plan to concentrate on study and research in this field in my graduate time. I hope I can form a systematic view of British Literature and make a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here.
Finally, whether I’m qualified or not, I’ll take this application as my new start point. Thank you!
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