一篇短文 / A Short Article

大家好。因为我已经很久没有用中文写一篇短文，所以我今天傍晚想写一篇，练习一下。
最近，我的生活没有特别大的变化：我好期待今年九月的到来。因为从这个时候开始，我要上大学了。在那儿，我会主修普通话和经济。而且，我不仅会和新朋友们一起玩儿、 一起喝酒，还会一个人住在我自己租的房子里。我期待学生的生活：不但不必很早起床、不必去上班谋生，还可以随时打盹儿、有足够时间可以看不少书，当然是中文的书，可以让我的中文进步。看很多书，这是一个非常重要的方式让语言语法进步。我非常喜欢看中文书。当前正在看的就是一本我在童年时候看过的书《查理和巧克力工厂》。即使这本书有很多我不认识的汉字，我得写下这些汉字，但是我也还是喜欢看。

谢谢大家，请你们告诉我你对我的文章的想法。

Hey guys, since it's been a long time since I wrote an article in Chinese, I want to write one this evening to practise a little. Recently, there haven't been any particularly large changes in my life. I feel like I'm just waiting until September. In will start university this September. At university, I will major in Mandarin and business. In addition, I won't only be able to to have fun with lots of new friends and drink together, I will also live by myself in my own place. I'm really looking forward to university life – not only will I not need wake up really earn in the mornings and not go to work to earn a living, I will be able to nap whenever I want to, and I'll have enough time to read lots of books. The books will, of course, be in Chinese as I they will help my improve my Chinese. I'm really looking forward to reading lots of books, it's a very important aspect in improving one's language skills. I really like reading Chinese books. At the moment I'm reading a book that I read during my childhood, it's called Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Even though there are quite a few characters that I don't know and I have to write them down in order to remember them, I still enjoy reading it.

Thanks, and please tell me your thoughts about my pronunciation. (I have listened back to it and can tell that I still sound foreign in some parts. Please be critical and strict with your comments, it's the only way I'll improve)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/og7cu1pq1vpl8cb/%E4%B8%80%E7%AF%87%E7%9F%AD%E6%96%87%20-%20A%20Short%20Article.mp3?dl=0

我和木偶的一天

我们骑车去了perth东区。
锁好车子然后走到木偶那里。
公园里有很多活动， 人非常多。 下一句你自己翻译怎么样。
早上十点， 木偶还没有苏醒
Wǒmen qí chē qùle East Perth. Suǒ hǎo chēzi ránhòu zǒu dào mù'ǒu nàlǐ. Gōngyuán li yǒu hěnduō huódòng, rén fēicháng duō. Xià yījù nǐ zìjǐ fānyì zěnme yàng. Zǎoshang shí diǎn, mù'ǒu hái méiyǒu sūxǐng
We ride to the East Perth.
Locked the car and then went to a puppet there.
The park has a lot of activity, people very much. Under one yourself how to translate.
Ten in the morning, the puppet has not regained consciousness