10 Sentences #2

Each week in my class, we are assigned a chapter to read, and there are a handful of vocabulary words we must use to produce 10 sentences. Below are my 10 sentences and what I'm trying to say in English. I will put a pair of forward slashes around the vocabulary words, so if there are corrections to make with the sentence, please try to at least keep those words. The goal is for me to broaden my understanding of how to use certain words and phrases. :)

Thank you as always for your help!

室友这年希望了省很多钱，恐怕因为他买这买那存款账户//仍旧//空得很。
My roomate wanted to save a lot of money this year, but I'm afraid because he keeps buying this and that, his savings accoung is still empty。
一些大学生//失败//得从父母//摆脱//，觉得把自己的生活//控制//将来不重要。
Some college students fail to break away from their parents; they thing taking control of their own life isn't very important.
美国人适应适得慢慢中国人的//语气//。
Americans adapt slowly to Chinese people's manner of speaking.
我想小孩子要//培养//态度又//自立//又//坚强//。
I hope my son develops a personality that is independent and strong.
因为篮球赛吵的慌，我太太//批评//看球赛；结果需要//悄悄//得看。
Because basketball games are so noisy, my wife criticizes watching them; as a result, I need to stealthily watch them.
跟老朋友吃晚饭的时候我//笑容//笑得不//停止//，也一般感觉//一帆风顺//。
When I can eat dinner with my old friend I cannot stop smiling, and generally feel as right as rain.
三年国开学中文但还不//取//地道的汉语名。
I started studying Chinese three years ago but still have not obtained an authentic Chinese name.
从台湾传教士来看我的中文//明显//的不怎么样，我的声乱七八糟。
From Taiwanese Missionary's perspective, my chinese is obviously not that great. My tones are in an awful mess.
墨西哥足球队一//胜利//赛就大家使一个//巨响//。
As soon as the Mexican Soccer team wins, everyone makes a loud noise
别//心疼//我，虽然我的中文不如同学，还会//进行//练习着！
Don't feel sorry for me, although my Chinese isn't as good as my classmates, I can still keep on studying!

Thanks again for your feedback. I plan on continuing to write several times per week!