(我的)室友希望了这今年省能存下很多的钱；但恐怕因为他买这买那的，他账户裡的存款//仍旧//空得很。
My roomate wanted to save a lot of money this year, but I'm afraid because he keeps buying this and that, his savings accoung is still empty。

有一些大学生在獨立生活方面很//失败//，他們無法//摆脱//父母過生活。甚至認為未來的人生是否//控制//在自己手中，並不重要。
Some college students fail to break away from their parents; they think taking control of their own life isn't very important.

美国人得慢慢适应中国人講話的//语气//和方式。
Americans adapt slowly to Chinese people's manner of speaking.

我希望我的兒子能//培养////自立//又//坚强//（坚强又自立）的個性。
I hope my son develops a personality that is independent and strong.

因为篮球赛吵的得慌，我太太受不了地//批评//我看球赛，结果因此我需要//悄悄//得的看。
Because basketball games are so noisy, my wife criticizes watching them; as a result, I need to stealthily watch them.

跟老朋友吃晚饭的时候，我臉上的//笑容//從未//停止//，如沐春風。臨別時，我們也祝福彼此的未來//一帆风顺//。
When I can eat dinner with my old friend, I cannot stop smiling, and generally feel as right as rain.

我三年国前开始学中文，但(至今尚未/)始終未//取//地道的汉语名字。
I started studying Chinese three years ago, but still have not obtained an authentic Chinese name.

从台湾传教士的觀點来看，我的中文//明显//的不怎么样，我講話的声調乱七八糟（／一團亂）。
From Taiwanese Missionary's perspective, my chinese is obviously not that great. My tones are in an awful mess.

只要墨西哥足球队比赛一獲得//胜利//，我們就會發出陣陣歡呼的//巨响//。
As soon as the Mexican Soccer team wins, everyone makes a loud noise.

别//心疼//我（／別為我感到心疼），虽然我的中文還不如同学的好，但我的學習仍持續//进行//练习着！

Don't feel sorry for me, although my Chinese isn't as good as my classmates, I can still keep on studying!

10 Sentences #2

Each week in my class, we are assigned a chapter to read, and there are a handful of vocabulary words we must use to produce 10 sentences. Below are my 10 sentences and what I'm trying to say in English. I will put a pair of forward slashes around the vocabulary words, so if there are corrections to make with the sentence, please try to at least keep those words. The goal is for me to broaden my understanding of how to use certain words and phrases. :)

Thank you as always for your help!

室友这年希望了省很多钱，但是我恐怕因为他买这买，所以那存款账户仍旧空得很。
My roomate wanted to save a lot of money this year, but I'm afraid because he keeps buying this and that, his savings accoung is still empty。
一些大学生失败得无法从摆脱父母摆脱，他们觉得把自己的生活控制将来自己掌控未来的生活不重要。
Some college students fail to break away from their parents; they thing taking control of their own life isn't very important.
美国人适应适得慢慢对于中国人的语气适应得很慢。
Americans adapt slowly to Chinese people's manner of speaking.
我想（希望）小孩子要（能）培养态度又自立又坚强的态度。
I hope my son develops a personality that is independent and strong.
因为篮球赛吵的慌，我太太批评对于看球赛提出批评；结果需要悄悄得看我只能偷偷看。
Because basketball games are so noisy, my wife criticizes watching them; as a result, I need to stealthily watch them.
跟老朋友吃晚饭的时候我笑容笑得不停止笑得合不拢嘴，也一般感觉一帆风顺（？）(总体上感觉很好)。 

When I can eat dinner with my old friend I cannot stop smiling, and generally feel as right as rain.
三年国前开始学中文但还不没有取地道的汉语名。
I started studying Chinese three years ago but still have not obtained an authentic Chinese name.
从台湾传教士的角度来看，我的中文明显的不怎么样，我的声调乱七八糟。
From Taiwanese Missionary's perspective, my chinese is obviously not that great. My tones are in an awful mess.
墨西哥足球队一胜利赛就大家使一个巨响，所有人开始欢呼。
As soon as the Mexican Soccer team wins, everyone makes a loud noise
别心疼我，虽然我的中文不如同学，但是我还会进行一直练习着！
Don't feel sorry for me, although my Chinese isn't as good as my classmates, I can still keep on studying!

Thanks again for your feedback. I plan on continuing to write several times per week!

10 Sentences #2

Each week in my class, we are assigned a chapter to read, and there are a handful of vocabulary words we must use to produce 10 sentences. Below are my 10 sentences and what I'm trying to say in English. I will put a pair of forward slashes around the vocabulary words, so if there are corrections to make with the sentence, please try to at least keep those words. The goal is for me to broaden my understanding of how to use certain words and phrases. :)

Thank you as always for your help!

室友这年希望了省很多钱，恐怕因为他买这买那存款账户//仍旧//空得很。
My roomate wanted to save a lot of money this year, but I'm afraid because he keeps buying this and that, his savings accoung is still empty。
一些大学生//失败//得从父母//摆脱//，觉得把自己的生活//控制//将来不重要。
Some college students fail to break away from their parents; they thing taking control of their own life isn't very important.
美国人适应适得慢慢中国人的//语气//。
Americans adapt slowly to Chinese people's manner of speaking.
我想小孩子要//培养//态度又//自立//又//坚强//。
I hope my son develops a personality that is independent and strong.
因为篮球赛吵的慌，我太太//批评//看球赛；结果需要//悄悄//得看。
Because basketball games are so noisy, my wife criticizes watching them; as a result, I need to stealthily watch them.
跟老朋友吃晚饭的时候我//笑容//笑得不//停止//，也一般感觉//一帆风顺//。
When I can eat dinner with my old friend I cannot stop smiling, and generally feel as right as rain.
三年国开学中文但还不//取//地道的汉语名。
I started studying Chinese three years ago but still have not obtained an authentic Chinese name.
从台湾传教士来看我的中文//明显//的不怎么样，我的声乱七八糟。
From Taiwanese Missionary's perspective, my chinese is obviously not that great. My tones are in an awful mess.
墨西哥足球队一//胜利//赛就大家使一个//巨响//。
As soon as the Mexican Soccer team wins, everyone makes a loud noise
别//心疼//我，虽然我的中文不如同学，还会//进行//练习着！
Don't feel sorry for me, although my Chinese isn't as good as my classmates, I can still keep on studying!

Thanks again for your feedback. I plan on continuing to write several times per week!