it's my first time to use it
hi!everyone,it's my first time to use it,let me introduce myself first..
i am not a beauty,i am a mommy.
two years ago work was my whole life,i couldn't give up my work because i thought if i gave up my work it will(is it wrong grammer?)be game over. One day I had a baby and I left my work naturally.i began to travel with my son until last year.we went to guangzhou,shunde(there are sooooooo much delicious food!!!!),zhuhai(there is a sea animal zoo,but i think it's not good to keep them in a little space,i wont be going there any more),beihai(in guangxi,there is a beautiful soft beach),and shanghai.
Very good Luna Fu - I understood completely. I have made some small changes but that was easy to understand. I am not too sure why you put ' I am not a beauty' because most people do not care about that - you are a mother and that in itself is a beautiful thing.