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Hi everyone! I study English and Spanish. I'm looking for an American to share American culture with me. Have a good day!
Good job. Most of the mistakes are minor, and your meaning is clear. I am an American from Texas, if you want to discuss American culture. i have been studying French for seven or eight years, and would like to improve my skills.
0 votedJuly 7, 20151Here are my attempts at corrections. I would be sure to get a second opinion from someone who is more experienced with building resumes.
Self intro:
Familiar with the basic knowledge of international trade
Strong communication skills and team spirit
Able to adapt to new environments and situations
Diligent, outgoing and responsible for my work
Responds well to a high pressure atmosphere
Working experience:
2012.07 As a saleswoman in Jiaonan Double Bead Curtain Mall, and participant in competitions.
2012.8-2012.9 As a saleswoman in Liqun Supermarket.
2015.4-2015. 6 As a operator Qingdao Anna and the Information Technology Co., LTD.0 votedJuly 6, 20150A small part of my paper. I hope someone can find some mistakes for me. Many thanks.
With the impact of international trade and the global economy, business activities between countries are becoming more and more frequent. China, as one of the biggest developing countries in the world, is developing increasingly quickly in trade with western countries. There is deep relationship between trade cooperation and business negotiation. People always tend to pay attention to verbal communication, which is considered the most important and direct communicative method in business negotiation. However, body language is more real and effective to communicate a person's emotions and attitudes. In international business negotiation, body language and verbal communication will always be inseparable. Body language is a very important tool for successful communication. The information provided beyond language, which can never be ignored. This paper mainly uses the literature review method to summarize the application of body language in business negotiations which is based on the experience of predecessors. The author lists a series of examples of body language in business negotiations to analyze the meaning in business negotiation, which makes readers understand the application of body language in business negotiation between China and England more clearly and easily. This paper attempts to explore the use of body language in business negotiations so as to enhance negotiators’ body language cognition in international business negotiations, avoid mistakes and improve the success rate of business negotiation.
0 votedJuly 6, 20150Because this seems to be a poem,
I may not fully understand what it is meant to say.
I also don't know whether you are following a specific form or meter.
Here is my attempt at corrections:
Is the grammar right?
As the day went on,
It is still the same,
Somebody is thinking of me/it(?); I am not sure what the object of this line is.
In the silent night,
The stars disappeared in the sky,
Somebody is looking up;
want to find some food,
But the fridge is empty,
I want to buy some more,
But only a few coins remain.
As you all know,
It is still the same.0 votedJuly 6, 20150Me, myself and I
Hello everybody!
My name is Mégane. I'm a 19 year old Frenchwoman. I'm actually studying through correpondance to get my BTS Management Assistant. (After checking Wikipedia, I think you may mean Secretary rather than Management Assistant. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Secretary)
I want to learn english because I've always been attracted to this language, and my dream is to live in America or just visit the country on holidays.
So that is my first post, I hope I didn't make too much mistakes...I hope... !I hope these corrections are helpful. I hope you are able to visit the US someday, it's a pretty cool place.
0 votedJuly 6, 20152

