My birthday!

Yesterday was my birthday. I received many birthday greetings from my family, friends and colleagues. It was really happy. Every year, when my birthday come, I like staying at home and have a meal with my family. Now, I'm 23 years old and 1/4 my life passed. I really want to say "Thank my parents for bearing me on August 19th". Moreover, I hope all of members in my family are health and happy. Honestly, I have never have a family trip. In the future, I will make a chance and to do that.
I would like to thank everyone for the best things done for me. :p

1. I was really happy or It was really a very happy day for me .     

2.  birthday comes

3. 1/4 of my life has passed (using '' has'' mean something started in the past and still continue in       the present.)

4. to say thanks  (OR   I want to thank my parent)

5. the members (need to use "the''  OR can say "all of my family members" )

6. Healthy (OR you can say like  "I wish all my family members stay healthy and happy")

7. Had 

8.  make a chance to do that  (You can say ''I have never had a family trip, but will try to                    make it happen in the future'' )

9.  the best things they have done for me 

TOIEC certification!

Haizz! Today I just received a notice from my manager. He said that all of new staffs in our company must register for TOEIC exam before 15th 2015. I was a little bit nervours. Honestly, I don't like learning English with the purpose for getting a certification. But my company requires it, so I must do that. My hobby is learning how to communicate in English. Exactly, when I learn English grammar I feel boring and it is quite hard.
This notice was very important. So I am trying to improve my English skills. My company's target for TOIEC score is 530. It contains two skills such as: listening and reading. I hope I will reach this target.

1. have just received 

2. staff (staff can be used as plural as well)

3. 15th 2015. (Month needs to be mentioned as well)

4. nervous 

5. Certificate (certification is correct as well but Certificate is more natural in this context)

5.   It is better to use ''to be honest'' than ''exactly'' 

5.1  bore (when I am learning English grammar, I feel bore and it is quite hard). 

6. My Company ''requirement'' for TOIEC  (requirment is more natural than target here)

7. It has two parts reading and listening (more natural)

8. I hope, I will achieve this target (achieve is more natural than reach here)

waiting

In our life ,i believe everyone waited for somebody. Maybe the one you loved or the one who love you.for me ,I am waiting for the one I loved deeply and I also hope more and more people will love me because everyone need love . Is it right? It is worth to wait .
Today, I spend much time waiting for a stranger, which make me a little angry . He asked me to borrow my computer to him and I told him the time to meet but he was late. I do not feel very well , which tell us keep time
To my surprise , I am willing to wait for my love . Maybe I would be happy when he or she appear. In a word , there have someone worth us to wait.

1. Waiting

2. May be the one to whom you would love or someone who would love you

3. I am waiting for the one to whom I will love deeply

4. needs

5. spent

6. no need to use ''to him''

There are still few corrections need to be made in terms of grammar. Also, some changes are required to convey the correct meaning

I guess that is what you are trying to say

Sometimes I feel lonely, I don’t know why? It is either I have lots of free time to think or have no one to share things with. It could be the impact of the bad weather as well. Once I had a good friend. We used to play different games every day after school, such as, skipping rope, hide-and-seek etc. We used to sleep and eat together that was the happiest time of life, but now I have got admitted to a college in Hebei province, which is far away from my home, whereas she has gone to another city to study fashion designing. I don’t know whether she is happy there or not because I haven’t met her for a long time. I miss her a lot. I can’t find a friend like her
I have been living alone for a long time, I miss her so much. I feel sad and lonely without her. I will remember her forever.
I hope we both have a happy life. Sometimes I feel lonely

Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why .maybe I am free or I have no one to take to or just the weather is bad .once I have a good friend ,we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal .but now I go to college in hebei province while she is study clothes-design in another city .i have not meet her a long time I don't know whether she is living happily.i miss her a lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time ,whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happiness life

Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why .maybe I am free or I have no one to take to or just the weather is bad .once I have a good friend ,we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal .but now I go to college in hebei province while she is study clothes-design in another city .i have not meet her a long time I don't know whether she is living happily.i miss her a lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time, whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happiness life

1. Please always put full stop at the end of a sentence, not at the beginning of next sentence.
2. After full stop, when you start a new sentence the first letter of the first word of a sentence is always capital
3. We capitalize first person pronoun 'I' even if it does not appear in the beginning of a sentence.
4. Continents, regions, countries, states, counties, cities and towns are always capitalized, according to that rule Hebei should be capitalized

Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why, maybe I am free or I have no one to talk to or just the weather is bad. Once I have a good friend, we talk everything to each other and we play after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek. We sleep together and go to the other side's house to have a meal, but now I go to college in Hebei province while she is studying clothes-design in another city. I have not met her for a long time; I don't know whether she is living happily. I miss her lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more.
Living alone a long time, whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. I will remember her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happy life