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My birthday! Yesterday was my birthday. I received many birthday greetings from my family, friends and colleagues. It was really happy. Every year, when my birthday come, I like staying at home and have a meal with my family. Now, I'm 23 years old and 1/4 my life passed. I really want to say "Thank my parents for bearing me on August 19th". Moreover, I hope all of members in my family are health and happy. Honestly, I have never have a family trip. In the future, I will make a chance and to do that. I would like to thank everyone for the best things done for me. :p

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Yesterday was my birthday. I received many birthday greetings from my family, friends and colleagues. It was really happy. Every year, when my birthday falls, I like to stay at home and have meal with my family. Now, I'm 23 years old and 1/4 my life has passed. I really want to say "Thank my parents for bearing me on August 19th". Moreover, I hope I wish members in my family are health and happy. Honestly, I have never gone with in family trip. In the future, I will make a chance and to do that.I would like to thank everyone for the best things has done for me. :p

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My birthday!

Yesterday was my birthday. I received many birthday greetings from my family, friends and colleagues. It was really happy. Every year, when my birthday come, I like staying at home and have a meal with my family. Now, I'm 23 years old and 1/4 my life passed. I really want to say "Thank my parents for bearing me on August 19th". Moreover, I hope all of members in my family are health and happy. Honestly, I have never have a family trip. In the future, I will make a chance and to do that.
I would like to thank everyone for the best things done for me. :p

 

1. I was really happy or It was really a very happy day for me .     

2.  birthday comes

3. 1/4 of my life has passed (using '' has'' mean something started in the past and still continue in       the present.)

4. to say thanks  (OR   I want to thank my parent)

5. the members (need to use "the''  OR can say "all of my family members" )

6. Healthy (OR you can say like  "I wish all my family members stay healthy and happy")

7. Had 

8.  make a chance to do that  (You can say ''I have never had a family trip, but will try to                    make it happen in the future'' )

9.  the best things they have done for me 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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be lated a very wishing you a lovely happy bithday hoang dear:-)

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