Job application (a task from student's book)
Hello everybody,
I had a task
, as
a homework
, in which I had to write a cover
ing letter for an advertised job. I would be happy to get
a feedback from a native-speaker.
Many thanks!
Dear Mr. Cunningham,
I am writing to apply for the job of camp monitor which was advertised on
the bt.com website.
I am 21-year-old student at the teacher’s training college of Moscow. I am fluent in English
, both spoken and written (IELTS score: 7.5)
. as I studied in Australia
during for 6 months
, 2 years ago. I also enjoy working with children,
that which is why I am studying
for
to being a teacher.
I have some experience
of working with children. As a senior class student, I
have spent more than 100 hours as a trainee in several schools. I participated in several camping trips
, during which I was
being in charge of children’s safety. I also used to play
in on a college volleyball team and
was part of the a school theatre for several years.
One of the main reasons I am applying for this job is that I want to get more experience
of working with children. Apart
of from my background
experience, I am a really communicative and outgoing person. As a future teacher, I had to pass
a psychological test one year ago and
, in the results
, I was described as an easy-tempered and calm man
which has with no potential constraints
for in working with children.
I
am attach
ing a full CV and photo, and should you require any additional information, I would be happy to provide it. I would also be grateful, if you could inform me about
the working days and hours. I am particularly interested
in knowing whether Sunday is
a working day
, or not, as I plan to enroll
on in a Sunday French course next month.
I look forward to your response. I can be contacted
both either by
the e-mail or on
my by phone (109-1234567) at any time.
Thank you for considering my application.
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Only a few minor corrections are needed. This is very well written.