Hello, I have looked at your writing, and you are doing very well. There are some changes that I have made below
Hi everyone, I would like to tell you about me and my brothers routines, every day I get up at
Hi everyone, I would like to tell you about me and my
brothers routines, every day I get up at five a.m. after I take a
shower and clean my teeth, I make my breakfast at quarter to six, I always include some fruit. Then I go to study in the University
until twelve o` clock. We have breaks between classes and I use it for talking
with my university partners, have a lunch
and play soccer in the football field until two p.m., later I take a bus home,
make some snacks, I study and complete my university homework for the rest
of the afternoon. Between seven o`clock and quarter to eight I have dinner, I
check social media, and watch the news
until eight o`clock. Later I go to the Street Park Gym and I do strength
exercise. After that I go home, clean my teeth and I go to
sleep watching TV movies. This is a normal day for me. Sometimes it is different, especially when I go to work at the weekend.
The routine of my brother is different, he is thirteen and he studies in the
high school he sleeps until seven a.m. and gets up at half past
seven. My mom makes his breakfast while he takes a shower and cleans his teeth,
after that he takes his school bus, he goes to school until six p.m. He has lunch and snacks which are fruit and a sandwich or something like that. He arrives to home at 7.30p.m. and he has dinner, later he starts to study until nine
o`clock. When he has finished he goes to clean his teeth and go to sleep.
<o:p> </o:p>Thanks for your correction. I still make well (I still make
good?)
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